FanTAStic alliteration.

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to eat to drink to be merry... "Beer is proof that God Loves Man" - Ben Franklin that guy in the Green Mile was infected with life, too. the words are nice, but perhaps this "haiku" should've been infected with line breaks. Stiil I give it an 8.

I didn't know they made sex beans, much ledd pre-sex beans. I knew they made mexican jumping beans. imagine combining those two! What a lover you might make then!

nothing personal, but I always belive that the word "just" is unnecessary in most writing. every word should count.

how cold. excellent.

I think it's in germany. Piss-poor point. Though now, the irony of an utter doofus trying to create some poeme lauding his intellectual superiority at labeling dates is funny.

um...riiight.

5-7-7? why not throw in the gorilla or the astronaut, too? I was listening to mu coconut radio the other day and I heard this song about a chicken and a ostrich in love. It may have been country western--they are like that somethimes. anyways, I was trying to get rescued by reversing the radio signal on my radio and I broke it, getting coconut cream all over my shorts. Thabnks alot for reminding me to take my shorts to the lagoon for a washing. Nice Hat. Why didn't THEIR clothes ever rip or get dirty? I'm just glad I have a coconut computer. Perhaps "lovey and her man" for the last line would be better, however shamelessly unpoetic.

Something on your mind?

Something on your mind?

5 because i'm contrary.

at's almost sad, but the "spring has spring" soiunds cliche or sing-songy, taking away from a mood that might surface from underneath.

'kay.

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nobody watches that anyways.

Are you my cousin? we should get married. I suspect the only thing truly molested here is the art from of Haiku.

I ghot a later one of this series before this. I think they should've been posted as a series of haiku on one post.

verry good, i'll smoke to that!

groovy.