deadstar
on dollar collar by rosiebailey
8 Jan 2003, 6:54 AM
respect, none of these incompetent fools seem to understand you, but me and freddy do
sent chills up my spine
*stands up and applauds you* well done stamp dearest
Oh dear I fear people are going to correct you that u is spelled 'you' and annoying is mispelled also, if your gonna have a go dont leave yourself open for corrections
A bit drawn out towards the end but otherwise it was quite atmospheric, I liked the theme.
Not sure on this one, it seems too obscure, I'll read it again tomorrow
Original, I like the way you describe things, its distinctive well done sir -9-
the adrenaline rush on the edge of control.
Howcome you were 2nd in the top 15? its so unfair that people can fuck about with votes, heres a 10 for your injustice it deservred it
where is novermber? Northen Germany or Switzerland? I can never remember.
Fascinating. I'm not old, but I bathe. So I can relate to this.
"detracts" seems awkward. perhaps something more sinister?
I don't know if you want it this way or not. 1 ding for the occasional off-rhyme.
Hell yeah, beatches, da rosie is back!!!
no. but I can spell c-z-e-c-h-o-s
uh, Damn! where's my dictionary?!!!
um...interesting viewpoint (i very much agree with not going to war in irag). one thing...is this really a haiku? i thought the form was 575. maybe i'm reading something wrong.
Gentle.