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Bachus on And uncle sam says... by INTRANSIT 7 Jan 2003, 11:56 AM

paint the white house black. fuck the white stripes our new band is the "Black squares"

INTRANSIT on Backwards baby blend by Blade 7 Jan 2003, 5:52 PM

Contrasting hard/soft and cold/warm. Interesting mix indeed.

<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 12:20 PM

whoever gave this the ten blast of 0's is anonymous and spineless more gen z wannabe rebellion, you fucks should rebel against your trust funds and mother's cookies and credit card swipes you balless fluffs.

famenglory on Shitetalker (An farewell ode to Settle. Read Nightwalker first) by Another Bobjim?!?! 7 Jan 2003, 5:50 PM

haha amusing

Bachus on Into the Deep by Owner of the Sky 7 Jan 2003, 11:57 AM

no job.

Bachus on This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky 7 Jan 2003, 12:03 PM

rack of black. roughage.

RGallet on The poemranker desk by lunar 7 Jan 2003, 5:02 PM

Dark Angel candidly admited that he loves you too. If only there were some spark to ignite the fires of passion! Perhaps prof. Hawking can help! The wheeled matchmaker. Seriously though don't give up on DA. He's got thick skin but one day you'll realize he's all your and your all his.

Topaz Servias on Condolences by Carvaceous 7 Jan 2003, 5:15 PM

Well....ummm...instead of jumping around this one seems to flow in every direction all at once, going around and nipping itself in the butt. good job though, it sends the feeling of sorrowful forgetfulness.

Topaz Servias on Slippery Reprieve by Carvaceous 7 Jan 2003, 5:18 PM

WEll done well done......shows you what life is like when it's elusiveness hides itself within your own grasp.

RGallet on Xmas gifts list by lunar 7 Jan 2003, 5:19 PM

Don't give up. I'm working on it.

INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 6:02 PM

Break 1-9 for a reality check!

Bachus on Home by Owner of the Sky 7 Jan 2003, 12:00 PM

with, or, and no one watching. lose the questom..shouldn't be a question, a statement.

Another Bobjim?!?! on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 1:48 PM

I give 5, not as it is deserved, but as it will banish this shite to obscurity.

lunar on Shitetalker (An farewell ode to Settle. Read Nightwalker first) by Another Bobjim?!?! 7 Jan 2003, 1:54 PM

I love settle he is great i cant belive he left us!!!!!

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan 7 Jan 2003, 2:00 PM

"beautific Dream" - "beautific" is not a word. Though I suppose you could make it up and say it means "beautiful". However, "beatific" IS a word. Perhaps you meant to say "beatific"? If so, that's great! "Scores of tunes entuned and I deem" - what do you 'deem'? Doesn't make any sense at all! Though I daresay it does rhyme with dream! Great work! "O my brittle of a voice" - this line also doesn't make sense.

lunar on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 2:06 PM

i love you settle! dont leave me for i will die!

lunar on Shitetalker (An farewell ode to Settle. Read Nightwalker first) by Another Bobjim?!?! 7 Jan 2003, 2:11 PM

i love u DA ur so gorgeous and wonderful

INTRANSIT on Into the Deep by Owner of the Sky 7 Jan 2003, 2:51 PM

apologiZe. change salt to gravel, I think. vellynize. aint seen you in a coons age. howaya,K?

INTRANSIT on Home by Owner of the Sky 7 Jan 2003, 2:54 PM

I concur. This is good raw. Bake it better.

lunar on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 2:17 PM

i thought u were leaving? i cried all night and now ur back again!! (or is this the last-last? its v. gd tho)