INTRANSIT
on electronically by Quarton
7 Jan 2003, 6:10 PM
ITS TWOO! ITS TWOO! Nice job Mr.ton Say, when is Jupiter supposed to pass near the U.S.?
Your poemes are ace.
um k?
wow
Poor girl/boy, cut their wrist to ease their pains. it's powerful, i like it.
This is what happens when your mind wakes up but your body is still asleep. It's a common phenomena, actually. It's stopped frightening me. BTW the secret to a good garlic sauce, as it turns out, is assloads of garlic. Not a lot, or alot, but assloads.
If you removed the first bit and the title, it would be an ace ending to a tale of creeping horror.
RGallet
on Shitetalker (An farewell ode to Settle. Read Nightwalker first) by Another Bobjim?!?!
7 Jan 2003, 7:39 PM
Okay this garlic sauce tastes A LOT LIKE WEED
I was in the Foyer, with the lead pipe or the rope, but not the gun or the knife. Also: Look into my eyes WHAM WHAM WHAM WHAM HOW DO YOU LIKE ME NOW FUCKING FAGGOT MOTHERFUCKET. thx
your missing the jejunum. idiot. 10!k
I like it as is. But what do I know
I drive a truck.
You ever read poetry? You ever read poetry....on weed?
The sea was red and the sky was grey, you're full of AIDS because you're gay.
go over this with a fine tooth comb. Quite funny. no vote till tweaked.
horus8
on Shitetalker (An farewell ode to Settle. Read Nightwalker first) by Another Bobjim?!?!
7 Jan 2003, 6:23 PM
settle. the more i stress intelligent. the more i proclaim, for you, the title..of fred savage super genius..you join wiley coyote and alf..in the hall of resentment. you failed. rhode island institute of the wonder years..tell wendy i said hi.
For a minute I thought you were watching Brain Dead in reverse, but then I realised it doesn't have this scene.
too many ellipses...tired theme
the final verse...doesn't rhyme
THIS SURE IS GREAT.
I was in the Drawing Room, belaboring Colonel Mustard with the Shoe-horne. Where were you?
So it is the people of average strength who will remain standing? I suggest you read my poeme "Unwanted gift".