RGallet
on alms by famenglory
7 Jan 2003, 7:51 PM
the last bit is a bit trite
don't fucking care doesn't say anything seen it before didn't like it then why now?
It's all you have to do, just tellalittlelie.
not funny enuf 2 b good.
No fucking way jeff beck is better than jimmy page no fucking way dude
Fucking shut up. Seriously, ziparooni.
Wonderful. Love the oh wells.
I like the idea but it's terribly stated.
here's a half penny.asl? owe. nice poem. here's a 10! and a new award THE JIMMY NEUTRON MOST LIKELY TO SUCCEED IN THE TED KAZINSKY CATEGORY. award. now that's some fucking special trim aye. asl? are you deaf? asl? yes a hiv deaf boy...on the eighth day we went and purchased a strokes album and said to ourselves wow post modernism did it to me, and the eighties. i think it was the plastic on your grandmas furniture and the fact you wet your bed until last month. care for a throat lozenge? oh well how about a ten! yeep..
Do they still have lynchings in California or did Atticus Finch deal them the final blow?
not enuf they're
last image is wonderful but not nearly strong enough.
change the last fucking to motherfucking, it'll help the rythm.
pretty boring, the title got my hopes up.
THIS SITE IS ONLY FOR SERIOUS POETS
Read Faust and then parody it.
suckey suckey
...and?? This poem says almost nothing other than that which is obvious. Yes, nothing other than. Keep workin' on it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111