cherish
on Hanging Glass by mindsigns
6 Jan 2003, 3:00 PM
that was great and totally touching
great job
nitty gritty.
shit em'
wow
an indescribable ear muff, and such.
would you be offended if i told you this poem makes me laugh hysterically and then stop?
you going to eat that pickle?
Um, did I piss you off?
This is better,though.
your garden imagery inspired my latest
Just popped backed to see how you were my old friend.Sad to see only one piece of your work here now.Please repost the one about the kids getting older again.Liked this one too.Will pop back in afew days to see if you are here.Happy new year. CSN
Pare it down and tighten it up. Good work!
juat awesome...I was so there and in to it. Definately a 10
mmmmm pretty good
wow, that was moving. I dunno what it was but i liked it alot
Beer isn't flammable. nice frequency modulation. your poem and you are underbred. though. like the royal family. check the ears. thankgod for princess die's kids. hopefulls? carefor a bong toke? churble burble churble burble <brought to you by 'freefall' why bring a parachute? it will only slow you down, and 'birdshit' for your hat and your car>
Definitely funny!!
By using haiku you trivialize what seems to be serious things.
it could have been way better