-=SeTTle=-
on You Can Count On Friends by Ojiboch
4 Jan 2003, 10:41 PM
Unique. 8.
good for a start. but something's lacking thou...
this is a nice poem and i can relate to it. however, the last need to read like this...because i think they're broken!
And we're puttin it on wax!! It's the new syle!!! 4and 3and 2 and 1......
What is normal? Great Idea, too plain. add color.
I enjoyed this also.
...sort of agree with the dude above me, but I love the first stanza. And the second for that matter...I'll think about the third for a bit...
i told you i loved this poem. its you, its totally you...and the ending is wonderful...10
isn't "to gether" one word?
not really that interesting.
good poem.
its almost like something that i would write.
there's a good twist to this
*applaud* good poem i must say.
alot of imagery
I loved this. A bit uh, a bit over the top in places but the freshness of the material more than makes up for it.
this is good, but are you fuckin getting lippy? have a 9 for both lips.
quite good. good title. that's all i can say.
ironside....ironside....
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!dude i owe you one, letws record, shawn did you go to vfegas or are you back?>. golden q-tip. sweet cheeks you are jesus. Settle? go fuck yourself art school fag. mommas boy trust fund..look down you know what that is edible mineral oil. fucking sell out ear lender.
Simply beautiful.
Best of dthe three.
No you will have only begun.