just keep working on it

"69" is the best bit.

Dude don't listen to assholes on here that don't know a damn thing about good poetry. I feel that if you feel good about what you wrote, it is good work. I honestly don't know why people put zero's for this. Hell, i could write up something on the life of a fucking mayfly and it would get better than that. Keep up the good work, check out some of my older and newer works.

Bingo.

What's your definition of respect? \ / \<>/ [}____ /\ / \_ `-

Sorry to ruin everybody's fun, But, AMERICA IS RESPONSIBLE FOR MOST OF THE FUCKUPS IN THE WORLD. THE TERRORISTS HATE YOU FOR A GOOD REASON. YOU DUMB FUCKS, NOT ONE AMERICAN IS INNOCENT, NO-ONE IS. YOU ARE JUDGED GUILTY, THE PENALTY IS DEATH. WITHIN 100 YEARS, EVERYONE WILL BE DEAD. FUCKERS.

I bet you'd make a good housewife. Submissive, easily fooled etc.

I mean, unless you're like me, you have to really think about your poems. The freshness and spontegayity of my work comes with lots experience and hard work.

Change blade to either twinkie or loofa.

I N-E-V-E-R suck dicks you know so i will tell you this is DREADFUL hahahahahahahahaha

This is really a brilliant poem- and so true! (probably) very cleaverly written and everything - see i show all the 10 signs of being in love with your poetry!

This is also very good. you most completly are.

yes of course!

I don't know, it sounds like your on your way down Valorie Solanas Avanue to me... but hey I agree, girls are cooler than guys...I'm a lesbian too:) I'm not a voter, but I will leave you with this.

enough of the old trying to numb it up, how about a tropical island as in you and me and some blow who knows.....

OKay, the joke was that you asked me to stop anonymously voting zeroes. So I came and voted zeroes but not anonymously. GET IT?? 10.

You're one of the few people who appreciate my genius / generous soul. 10.

Have a ten duewD!

It's not as bad as I first thot. 10.

I wish I knew what it was like to be obsessed with my gender.