-=SeTTle=-
on Frozen Angel by Ranger
3 Jan 2003, 5:59 PM
I'm Ranger and I'm into poetry and art!!!!! ZERO. STANDING ON YOUR NECK PISSING INTO YOUR NOSTRILS.a
The rhyme of Chaucer and force her made me laugh, which is saying a lot. Good work. But I still have to nullify you (get it?) Zero.e
i believe in miracles. where you from? you sexy thang:
http://fotm.rotten.com/fotm/fisting-of-t
should auld acquaintance be forgot...
maybe. but not this poem. i like very much the final resolution here.
Not only are you still here, but you still suck shit at everything because you're a complete fucking retard (seriously). Zero.??
So, I hear your new filing technique is unstoppable. This is clever and even makes a nice shape on the page--of course,
-=Dark_Angel=-'s version has that lovely ~fin~. You both forgot to put in the part where Ornella Muti is revealed to be a Horus8 Kreation (TM)--or does that happen in the sequel? I always forget.
This does not hold up to your usual standard. The opening line just sounds boring. I am not missing the point.
I like the concept of a hot maid. But this is just dumb.
i'll bring the jergans, you bring the oatmeal.
bravo.ewerp. excuse me.
Ambitious, even for u! I realize you're mine.n
Write some more poetry about it, pathetic whining apathy ridden faggot fuck face dicklicker. Yeah or a haiku, even better. Grow up. You get a 10, unless you bother to vote.a
Book Two: Settle: Look how witty I am!! How come none of you like me??
Oh and I have covered both of them better than you ever could have so stop trying. Write about something challenging like Nicholas Jones.c
The format of this one is overused. 0.
You won't learn anything useful from drawing statues. Zero because you didn't know that.n
I'm giving you a zero because you're avering 3 dicks before lunchtime you're causing some tension in the gay mafia.??
Have I mentioned that I go to art school and are very talented?? Teach me to haxor teh lunix plz/. (0, I'm the only one who can do comedy here. It doesn't suit someone of such womanly character as yourself).
Zzinnia is right about the I & II--it serves no purpose here. You have some pretty lines, but this is flimsy--there's nothing forming a coherent whole here.
change title to the laws of attraction "not an airborn virus", but a soup you can eat with a spoon.