wOrnella Mutiw
on some deleted poem
3 Jan 2003, 5:03 PM
Can you please go and find a new system for filing? Thanks
dogs -> dongs, and give it more of a punch at the end. Trust me I'm an expert.??
nice to see something that isn't haiku. Care for a boku?
My sensitive metapoeme (I am a) Comic Genius is much better, especially considering how it is unfunny and came after my genius piece "Top Ten Signs..." which primed the pump for a laugh fest which never came. Until the most recent one, "Ode to Poetry". Your poem, and the mystery in one part, aren't very funny, although I intend to take the third stanza of this one further.
This is aweful - not awesome.r
Which ways would that be?? By the way it's obviously your fault.
Nice one. Don't be put off by the 'experianced' poets. I mean, sure, they know everything about the world and if they don't like it, it's crap. Well, thats bullshit. If you like a poem, it's good for you. All that matters is, do you like it? If so, you've done a good job. And remember my motto:- ' Fuck 'em if they don't like it, 'cause they're all bastards anyway'. 10, Because I liked it. Anyone who wants to rip it to pieces, Sod off and get a life you low-life sadist piece of crap. Crawl off back to your hole and die. It's people like you that ruin life for the rest of us. Sad Fucks.
Are you Vulcan's lover or Blake's pet rock? I see, maybe. Well anyway, you have managed to wander off and are lost in the desert of bad poetry. Find a map, get out, before the water runs dry and the food is gone. Nine out of ten poets agree you missed the point of the number one thing of which nine out of ten poets agree. Ugh. Painful.
Dark Angel's new persona is amazing, good work.r
Plaid Skirts are so fucking tired. Zero.d
You still feel 1onely don't you. Get it?? 1. Just kidding, 0.
good work, you get a/.d d a a 8 no 9 no 10 no 9. NO u8! 9! OKAY 9!a
Seawall? Dyke? 4??////// YOU CHEATED ON ME IN DEED AND IN THOUGHT WITH ANOTHER WOMAN/
Is your mom as handsome as me? I think not.I
why not...write a poem about it?
You might think I ain't worth a dollar but I feel like a millionaire.H
What's with girls and poetry. Jesus christ I never saw Ezra Pound cover this material.p
NO
Is there a way to lose (1) "resolve line. preferably S-2 L-3. Other than that I wouldn't touch it.
Beautiful....