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Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Sep 2002 · 5 comments

They don't deserve this They are way too young Two of four children Including me as one It wasn't supposed to be this way for them They were to have a better life And all because of one person They will never have that life I miss them and love them so very much I would do anything and everything for them They are my two biggest buddies And will always be there for me till the end They'll always be my brothers No matter what people say No one can take my place ever I love them in each and every way.

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[4] nentwined 11-Sep-02/10:16 AM Reply

I'm confused. Oh, I see -- I was reading "two of four children, including me as one" to mean you were one of the two... which made the rest of the poem very skewed.

The actual rhythm of the poem I find overly halting, stopstarting, and repetitive -- it drones.

I'm left mildly curious as to what's happened to or with them.

[n/a] god 11-Sep-02/10:17 AM Reply

Seems a little confused and confusing-have another go and see if you can understand it first !

[n/a] Katie 13-Sep-02/6:44 AM Reply

[5] -=SeTTle=- 3-Jan-03/5:26 PM Reply

Which ways would that be?? By the way it's obviously your fault.

[10] Emotionz 9-Jan-03/3:29 AM Reply

It feels like u've just read a story in my life..