Who are you tryign to impress? The french waiter who is obviously not a participant of this site.

You give all Southerners a bad name, you ignorant piece of shit. Having gone to school in the South, I can tell you that educated white Southerners look past skin color. For God's sake it's 2003....you're so behind, and ignorant...I hope a Black Panther gets you good.

good call.h

"Maybe were just close friends..." til the end ofthat stanza is pretty much the entire poem. "Rough chin" my personal favorite. I don't believe the more in love the worse the writing. Without inspiration we are lost. It just a matter of seperating the wheat from the chaff. I serious about that one stanza being the poem. Take all the other stuff away and see if it stands up.

dylanesque.

"orsmiles on thier" before you attempt to get crafty nb you should, perhaps. spell check.

"and lost like tears in rain." try lost as my tears in her rain. "through my body, in to my soul." how about 'into instead of in to...?a

What an incredible waste of bandwidth you've discovered!

really interesting and full of dark emotions. I must ponder it again.

an unsent letter?GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD...A POEMRANKER MUST READ..wonder no longer.@

these aren't the droids we're looking for.

take it someplace, now that you have a lift

I think the soap dropped me on my head as a child. Not sure I understand whats going on here, but was very amused. 8

I don't know whether to cry, or be scared as hell.

Will the play be enjoyed by the aristocratic, older than God, white couple seated on row 1...probably not, but that's the point.

hehehe Par cons??quent le sn je crois que quelques choses doivent p??rir. ..vous entre eux

Give me some examples.

Je suis le pamplemouse et dans le fenetre. Avec les ouef.

did you sell me out the other day to that newbie?t

Wonderfully beautifully wintery. 10