Bill Z Bub
on Fetish. by Plasticgirlwithgun
6 Dec 2002, 7:25 PM
i think this is your best yet.
Someone who makes love and doesn't screw? Is that just more of an "in-out" motion or what? Or are we talking tongue here?
"He's" requires an apostraphe in this case, as it is a contraction of "he is".
Hmm...
A bit too straightforward.
But at least I get it.
I hope.
Smart vegans just steal their honey. Yay for dumpster diving!
brill-frigging-illiant.
I take my hat off to you sir,
O hatters hare,
you have earned the respect
of the contrary man
adieu
I quite like the middle. The beginning and end have me confused and flustered.
Maybe if I knew what it was about...
cruel intentions
are funny
aren't they?
rock.
Agemo-Z
on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit
6 Dec 2002, 8:17 PM
My beer poem is better. Lewser.
*breaks into falsetto*
If you have to gooooo
Don't say good-byeeeeeee
If you have to gooooo
don't you cry-eyeeeeeeee
And if you have to goooo
I will get byeeeeee
I will follow you
See you on the other siiide...
*cough*
Leave it to Billy.
Only if there were realy guys like that...
"Space-age Bun Rigidifier" is a beautiful phrase, but this does go on a bit long for my taste. Fun, though.
Was the baby Jew... you know... "cut" yet? Or was it a girl? I need to know. For statistical reasons.
You messed up "rub's", so no 10.
Thank you ever so much for making this the ninth poem written in honor of my work here. I believe that officially takes the cake. It is amazing the depths one will sink to show the lack of integrity.
Press the action button, dammit!
Owl eats duck.
To the dirt roads with you and your lover,
for it is her which is your mission to find.
So, so you have with your smoke, your wimpers and your wine.
I prefer the live version.
9 looks lonely, so...
Rock forth.
Not on, forth.