<{Baba^Yaga}>
on Hefty Smurf by Bachus
6 Dec 2002, 4:47 PM
stopo
in the real time world
beauty and ugly
come wrapped up.
two for one.
our special deal.
one life only.
BTW I like the line "makes love and doesn't screw"
Yes! Yes! let me..let me..r
da da da, da na DA!m
the wind is the barber.
funny..the end starts to toss and turn a bit, but funny, funny shit.
green is my favorite color dark forest green.....10.
amazing. like speaking life into a rib.
people climb mountains to climb..never to mount. ??
damn, the random buttom goes to the smurf channel?
love it, last line is perfect. what more can i say? i shall rate thee high.
what? fatter? you date rich guys and you're a spoiled brat...you watch ricky schroeder in silver spoon reruns...ha!ha! and the truth is blood makes you queasy...great poem! 9.h
even at 2:24 typos like that fuck up the poem like a monkey wrench. change i to they in increases self involvement by pretending to shy away from it.f
by the way my vote was the 10 that put you on the best list..i accept kickbacks, and i fillibuster well, let me know if you need any soft money contributions or lobbying, in the future, i'll do good work for you, and for the people.
powerfull and heartwrenching.
i would lose reversible and maybe even emotions, but maybe not.
that's hilarious! but, really? h
eek! beware the picolla.e
Me too. pleasant dreams.g