cleverdevice
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 2:36 AM
In the words of Avid Merian, 'He makes me sex-wee!'
oh and zzinnia too
this could be good if more specific, selling a point of which as it stands is debateable
I went to venice in august and the gondola man fell off, i was stranded for 10 mins just floating nowhere---nice poem by the way
Not particulatly interesting to anyone other tjhan for you and who it was written for, however thats not to say its shit or anything its one of those split opinion ones, I liked it, though you could widen its appeal by being more original heres a respectable 6
Strong, atmospheric, and well told, but the titles gotta go, how about 'Lovers in Nocturne' or something more general to the poem
I found this more accessible than some of your others, I wish I had more time to absorb your writing, most times I have to read these at work, whats incessant s? This shown me a different side to you & I liked it GW
you crack me up !
This moved me PK, it made me feel for you watching her grow up from a child and realizing one day she'll be independent. Also I wanted to get something straight, what i meant by 'old school' was poets more experienced than myself whos been on this site longer, It wasnt meant as offensive, I'm here to learn off you, GW, Intrasit, Horus, Dark Angel,Tintagiles, your all muses of mine -take the compliment
i'm guessing you've had a bad year.
was she as jumpy jolly and jovial as this?
A pretender to the crown of Freddy I see. Hmmm, I did not realise what I am up against. The record shall have to be set straight.
So would I;but I would use something more painful,like a cheese grater.
Perhaps this is a synopsis for a new 'Nightmare on elm street' film?
Or perhaps not.
Ice cream is excellent moisturiser so my mates tell me
morning dear bob. I like the last 3 lines bestest, is it an poem about cannibalism?
You should carry this on more it ends to abruptly, this could be promising so kick this back in there, the 3 votes a bit out of order -6-
Inspiring