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on In Full Stop by vulcan
29 Nov 2002, 2:09 AM
boring.0.
hahaHA! your killing me has ha! holy shit are you serious?..0.
and the image is ended in the last two lines of the stanza by the way, that's why subconsciously you seperated the last two sentences from themselves and the stanza...you might still be a little two close to the piece to recognize that though right now so...no biggy..goodbye.
no shit. you were too plastic for me..no offense i mean! i love ralph lauren and all..it's just your croisant crumbs in the bed every morning? they would work their way into my tiht liddle ass, crack and vua-la....beef stroke-an-off pie filler.
hooray.0.
great!7
i too were blee blah blah blee fertin hive in the stroo hore see..ble? you must be a seasoned veteran i'm sure you wont mind me ..broesing around your..ah...innards. 3.
now see..i hate your fucking guts you fuckin ponpous shit worm, nut i'll also give credit were credit is due 10!...just kidding 0.
how about.....in through the out door. you don't desere in the evening. but what the hell....duh duh duh duh duh nah nah boi shing shing duh..da..da..da..duh dunna duh dunna na..boi shing swinga ning. 0.
i married clandestine too? pray for me ha ha ha! 0.
merry thanksgiving my crimson snap dragon...my love for you is subordinately crocidiled...and fat free tooo. 9
change the 18th word to "an" take three steps back from it and go "ewe-gi boogie boo" than presto a fat turnip for late not hot arserings insteads..yip ee. 8.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2002, 1:23 AM
It could be worse, you could be a vampire, and as a result you wouldn't even be able to see yourself.Think about it.
change u'll to wuel, you must be british... i do truly feel a bond with them at a belt buckle height, but being a 'true' american i understand slang, and embrace it on a red neck-ed level, now..GOD DAMNIT GIRL! GET YOUR PA A SCHLITZ BEFORE I SCHLITZ YOUR SILVER SPOONED TIGHT LITTLE ASS...LIKES I DOES YOUR MA,,NOW GET..YEW SLIMY GAWKIN FUKSTIK FOR I PUTS MY FOOT IN YOUR ASS! you have to caress the vowels and syllabols my friend..trust me..they are all readilly attainable..use? the force.
WELL MY FRIENDS! LOOK YE NO FURTHER THAN here to see how truly worthy assholes get to be president of the u.s. of a. amazing..bravo..bravo..fascinating really..you must think you can talk shit like that about me, and also make my sister pull off all of her poems and have an episode all in a week huh..impressive..(you're wrong dick, i'm just starting with you, and believe me when i say i'm motivated, have your little cronies talk weird shit about my kid again...adnd i'll fucking kill you).you and bush have something in common now. bush between you and the inevitable fucking spineless coward.
if you take out the last sentence..you have a gold mine..congradulations. happy thanksgiving. 10.
yeah, but it's redundant..when it comes to sharp intuitive skills, so.. we already know. if you know what i mean .or rather that's what we're hoping for.. maybe add..and took your sweet time..to it? i gave you ten..what the fuck? it just left me a tinge underdone..not that medium rare isn't great sometimes.
it's about the exhaustion of love, and the price that comes with it.
Nice imagery