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Tigger8023 on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 7:30 PM
really good
INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 6:31 PM
Hardcore truth! Bingo!
Tigger8023 on Shut the fuck up and fix me a Scoobie snack. by Bachus 27 Nov 2002, 7:28 PM
Nice
Bill Z Bub on IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria 27 Nov 2002, 4:56 PM
How unseemly. Theres some genuine emotion there, but I don't care for the imagery. Welcome to Life.
Tigger8023 on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 7:28 PM
I love it!!!
Tigger8023 on Charlie by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 7:29 PM
Thats cool
Bill Z Bub on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 4:38 PM
Loved t he first half, right up to "big shot", second half still good, but didn't resonate with me as much. Good work.
Bill Z Bub on Alone by ThoughtfulSoul 27 Nov 2002, 4:50 PM
i feel sad now.
horus8 on Exhaustion by vulcan 27 Nov 2002, 8:37 PM
like a bullit. concubines are groovy. here's a 9. the title works well off of te statement, as it should.
INTRANSIT on Shut the fuck up and fix me a Scoobie snack. by Bachus 27 Nov 2002, 6:49 PM
Definitely 2 shags here!
Bachus on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 6:52 PM
i must say..this is a frisky kitten. 9.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 5:41 PM
"hells, not me," was the pinnacle of this cap, is it, yes i believe that was a cap on someone..hmmmmmmm. your not a dumbass. you're a compass, and jeff bridges from starman all at the same time.o
INTRANSIT on two poles are better than one by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 2:22 PM
Megadeths' "sweating bullets" comes to mind.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria 27 Nov 2002, 2:30 PM
here, let me help you...take your bike seat and 90 degree it...there..that's better..now let's see if we can't get you to ride without your training wheels soon.3.
INTRANSIT on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8 27 Nov 2002, 2:32 PM
....just kickin' here,aint no boot lickin' here...
==Doylum on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 2:33 PM
possesive how do you thrill a note? Give it a slur?
INTRANSIT on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 2:43 PM
Works for me. Even if it is misshapen.
horus8 on my soul i give by roxy 27 Nov 2002, 7:38 PM
no, STOP!...here's your blow dryer back...don't do it. try a nive relaxing bath while you dry your hair.n
horus8 on It's All 'Cause I Love You by Tigger8023 27 Nov 2002, 7:40 PM
alot? Salem's lot. h
Bill Z Bub on Exhaustion by vulcan 27 Nov 2002, 5:02 PM
This does not comply with the dictates of logical poetics. But seriously, theres something about the word "mistress" that I just don't like. But I was going along with it until the final line. Maybe if it was made into a Haiku?