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==Doylum on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 8:10 AM

oww!

==Doylum on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 8:12 AM

whats the shape?

Bachus on two poles are better than one by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 10:14 AM

yep. that's the one.

poetandknowit on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 9:09 AM

Much better, but ditch the title.

poetandknowit on Thats one rockin' bacchanalian orgy. by ==Doylum 27 Nov 2002, 9:30 AM

It is up to you Dolie to save the fate of English literature. Go now to the towns, to the country, rid the isles of cultural mediocrity. Ring your cowbell in the night, line them up, make them take notice. Take away their TVs. Do you prefer goats over pigs? Do they have souls? It is good to see you keeping with current events. This will get the Hours8 journalism approval.

anitawit on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 10:49 AM

Welcome back.

anitawit on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 11:00 AM

Ughh! He wasn't a gentleman.

anitawit on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 11:05 AM

There seems to be a 'Lark Angel' lurking around somewhere, any relation?

anitawit on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 11:12 AM

'Twould have been very English tea but for the 'fucking', and isn't three a little early?

anitawit on without music by Limness 27 Nov 2002, 11:18 AM

Poignant

UnityMitford on Thats one rockin' bacchanalian orgy. by ==Doylum 27 Nov 2002, 8:41 AM

nice. brilliant even. somehow, the only thing that would improve it for me is if you made her from a different country. chile doesn't have the loaded irony i want. 9

Beaner99 on two poles are better than one by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 8:06 AM

This is great. I think the last stanza is perfect

Beaner99 on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 8:11 AM

Maybe only use the word Shock once at the end...

Beaner99 on memory by Goose 27 Nov 2002, 8:13 AM

Short and to the point and hard hitting. Good Stuff.

==Doylum on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 8:27 AM

so did i steal whoreass bong?

Caducus on two poles are better than one by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 9:25 AM

heres an ending i think rocks ! CHANGE I SPOSITIVE, CHANGE IS GOOD, NOW BACK THE FUCK OFF, YOUR BOILING MY BLOOD, YOUR NAILING ME DOWN, PUTTING THORNS IN MY CROWN, WATCH ME BLEED SLOWLY, YOUR LOVE IS DISEASE, YOUR LOVE IS UNHOLY, I CURSE THE DAY YOU'D EVER SHOWN ME, LOVE..........? got possessed for a minute their

UnityMitford on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 8:45 AM

i want more from the last line. how about "while hitler sniffles," or "inside your stinkhole" or "like the Gestapo"?

ecargo on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 8:51 AM

What's a Nagian?

vulcan on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 11:23 AM

one can't help exclaiming " WOW!!"8

vulcan on Fallen by Beaner99 27 Nov 2002, 11:27 AM

good(of course because of the pretention!)6