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on some deleted poem
27 Nov 2002, 6:21 AM
nicely done. the thought is complete as it stands.
Christ, I laughed more during Oedipus Rex (you may have heard about his odd complex)
Finally someone who understands the importance of a good pie. It's a British thing anyway, none of you Americans would understand. I would be interested in your opinions on my poem 'Pies', please take a look.oh, thats a 10 by the way
Is this a positive or negative progression? Are these good things, bad things, or a bittersweet mixture of the two?
Zzinnia!I'm shocked at your disregard for the sensitivity with which us men consider our genitalia! I'm going off now to try out a new g-string.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
27 Nov 2002, 5:59 AM
Curses!Our plan has been foiled!And we were so close to the top 15!!!! grrr
Nice poem!! i love it how you put in that shape... it must of taking a long time to do that!!
Love it
NEVER chuck anything away, you could be chucking $$$$ away.
I think it ends how it was destined, And its got an identity now, mournful, sad, ironic, and to quote ' reflective so heres an 8
Please tell me the shocks are all sarcastic.
What's the song, 'On top of Old Smokey'?
i don't think you need 'falling' twice, but i like it at the end. maybe a different title? also, maybe something other than 'deeper' twice? or make it a third, so the repetition is intentional? nice. spare. effective. have a 7 for starters.
sooo...cow tipping this evening? my field or yours?
very nice. good rhythm and all-arounnd goodness.
listen to zzin and p&K, melinda. invest in some eyeliner, clearasil and fishnets now so you'll be all stocked up.
the loom looms. i cower in shivery fear. fun.
UA:'No, sir, you fail to understand the ambiguity of my comment!Tom Lehrer my buttocks.