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Caducus on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 3:45 AM

pretty good !

Caducus on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 4:53 AM

Old Nicks got it right give us more!

Caducus on ode to bacchus by daniella 27 Nov 2002, 5:02 AM

tongue in what cheek?

Caducus on Fire And Fuck by Bonehiss 27 Nov 2002, 4:33 AM

I had the benefit of a few pointers you gave me on the comments page of your other work 'Another Chance'. Thanks to the background I understand this perfectly but to the uninformed it may be difficult to comment on as theirs no indication to what the addiction is, and a need to know more may be the problem. However i think its a strong piece-well done, just work with it, make a few drafts-try again and resubmit after careful edit.

Caducus on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 4:59 AM

Melancholy ! take this 8 and slap it about

deadstar on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 5:11 AM

Funny because you draw so heavily from the stereotype(true or not). But I always thought it was 'dawg' not 'dowg'?

cleverdevice on The North Wind by Ranger 27 Nov 2002, 2:17 AM

I've got a girlfriend, she's called Handgela!!!!! Well she's been good to be since I broke up with my last girlfriend. I say broke up, I catually mean popped.

Caducus on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 5:22 AM

Quite evocative ! I wrote a death piece too see what u think (the last words she said) heres a 7 well done ma'm

some deleted user on Lifted from a song- gang bang by UAFANTHORPEY 27 Nov 2002, 5:26 AM

Ah man, the memories just come floodin back

cleverdevice on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 2:11 AM

Yup, keep at it Red_neck.

some deleted user on suicide lost the plot by T'ien 27 Nov 2002, 2:17 AM

HEY Y'ALL ITS ME, CLETUS AGAIN, JUST THOUGHT ID ASK, ANY OF YOU SUBSCRIBE TO ANY GOOD GUN MAGAZINES? YOU ALL SEEM LIKE YOU WOULD THOUGH FOR DIFFERENT REASON TO ME!!!

some deleted user on Maliced flame by T'ien 27 Nov 2002, 2:18 AM

SORRY BOWY I JUST DONT UNDERSTAND THOSE LONG WORDS LIKE THE AND AND

cleverdevice on Maliced flame by T'ien 27 Nov 2002, 2:19 AM

Yes, incest is truely terrible, eh?

cleverdevice on To Kiss by Jody Conn 27 Nov 2002, 2:22 AM

Wow, very sensual and almost fine erotica.

Ranger on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 2:23 AM

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA! Not that I haven't see this before...

Caducus on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 2:30 AM

Wondered where you were, Greetings and Salutations ! I liked the vibe in this piece but take it or leave it heres a last line i think could end it..... Fuck ! life can be so acrimonious. anyway drag this 7 by the hair and drag her away.

Caducus on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 2:50 AM

Does it need to be continued? Most of my poems are based on grief for personal reasons, and I think your poem is haunting, and touching without needing to add anymore, it left me reflective. You score 9 for this = well done

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 3:14 AM

In America, we have the right to bear arms. It is written in the Constitution and I thank the Lord that I live in a nation in which the people are free to defend themselves. Americans don't just have the right to bear arms - they have a duty, as good citizens, to do so. Perhaps now you will understand just how important guns are.

Ranger on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 1:30 AM

Better title this time

deano on Everyone loves me- not. by UAFANTHORPEY 27 Nov 2002, 2:36 AM

hhh y2j rvd hbk booker t kane by the way i hate/love wrestling