I await more, with interest.

Beautiful...Simply Beautiful!!!

Minus the ampersand, this is decent. But maybe it is the fact you like the Eels, who are quite possibly the most underrated band ever. Who knows?

It's a little thin, eh? Needs more details perhaps?

LMAO.......WHAT THE ???.......YEAH WELL....YOU ASK IF "I" WATCH OPRAH......*ROLLING EYES*.....LOOK WITHIN YOUR MESSED UP PILE OF WORDS BEFORE YOU JUDGE OTHERS....AND BESIDES.....I AM POSITIVE THAT NOBODY'S FEELINGS CAN BE JUDGED,BUT IF YOU WANT TO START A TREND....THEN HEY IM FROM THE LAND WHERE PETS DONT NEED SHRINKS.....LETS GO LMAO...YOU SICK PUPPY!!! IF YOUR COMMENTS MADE ANY SENSE.....I'D BE HAPPY TO TAKE THEM IN :)I VOTE ONE FOR......UMMMMMMM........WELL COZ I'M NICE......

Clever!!! I'm not a big fan of Haiku but I really liked this lol.... :)

This is awesome....I write pretty long poems.....but I have never found such feeling,felt such sadness in so few words....Wonderful!!!

i do not. mind you. the thing is. i was an idiot to give them the weapons to destroy me with, but i'm a sucker for people with great minds and talent. if they want to low ball me with something as trite as biceps and haircuts, of course i'm going to be pissed. i happen to be more committed to what i've achieved without brawn, to what i've achieved with it...i can't help it if this world revolves around britney's tits, and not her jewish song writer's mind. i'm working against that too, and i don't enjoy being condemned for it, nor does my best friend and co-songwriter.

ummm oh and can i get a side order of those lovley potato skins with cheese in them? forward them to me in the north pole

umm and thongs are nice on women but make men look gay, althgouh women also are nice in crotchless panties, men in them are just weird and fucked up

This poem must be fucking brilliant if it can instigate such emotions in people. It definately doesn't deserve to be taken off. If I may be so bold as to put forward my humble opinion, I don't disagree with Christianity. I'm not religious, because I'm not sure what to believe in. However, I don't agree that America is a force of peace across the world-in fact, America and the West contributes hugely to the world's problems. For example, how about Iraq? Sure Saddam is insane and dangerous, but America is so determined to invade for their own purposes that they are willing to endanger the world. And who is currently oppressing other Middle-Eastern nations so the only way they can respond is through terrorism? It seems obvious to me that the large percentage of America doesn't give a fuck about the outside world because they're happy to keep their cheap oil and not have to waste time saving the rainforest-and therefore the world. That's my rant over, sorry it took so long, but it's an issue I take very seriously, and would like to hear the American view on this. If I'm drastically wrong on this, then please let me know, but I don't think I am.

sounds like a good night in reverse, first you smoke grass, then you get and ulcer and finally wake up with a dog

ah, melinda. invest in black. you'll wear it well.

appealing in its barreness. but un new. so? an 8 because i am a sucker for a love poem, even if it feels like self help. you watch oprah, dontcha?

Hi, I think this is pretty good but in my opinion it suffers because of the repitition, not of the first line, which works, but a few other lines and concepts are repeated in a way that seems unnecessary to me. Still a good effort.

I really liked this one. kicked me in the gut. because I'm feeling that way, I'll go with an eight.

no.

and then?

Holy Shit. Been There--thank you

This isn't actually bad. It actually makes me think this really happens-what's the story?