some deleted user
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2002, 11:07 AM
Don't think I'll be getting into any serious arguments with you in the future, lest the same fate should be placed on my comments
YOU SHOULD HAVE USED MY TECHNIQUE OF RHYMING WORDS WITH THEMSELVES. CHEAP ANNOYING RHYMES. REPEATING WORDS.
This will undoubtedly haunt me whenever I buy a KFC
OH GREAT NOW I HAVE ANOTHER ERECTION.
very mischevious, but your spelling is shit, i'm sure you've heard that before though huh?
THOSE PEOPLE WILL EAT *ANYTHING*
I ACTUALLY HAD THIS IDEA - POSTING A WAD OF COMMENTS. I THINK I'LL DO MY OWN. THAT'D FUCKING ROCK.
nice
ok
no offense but it sounds like your writing the same poem just to different people, add some diversity
why not...write a poem about it?
-=SeTTle=-
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
23 Nov 2002, 11:31 PM
OH GOD MONKEY ISLAND POETRY
I was kind of into this until the stupid faggot fuck face stanza. It took me right out of the poem and I couldn't finish it.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2002, 10:41 AM
What's the point?And how is it connected to Marlon Brando?
I like the line 'you can't forget the stench of burning boots', but to be brutally honest that's about it.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2002, 10:51 AM
estoy de acuerdo, pero tiene un poco de ambiente,creas que si?
So bad it's not even funny
hell man!Keep this up and they're gonna give you a knighthood!10