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bondjedi on James Dean by horus8 30 Oct 2002, 9:13 PM
brilliant
Tintagiles on Avetis by KilIluminati 30 Oct 2002, 9:00 PM
Either you're illiterate; or English is not your first language, but your third or fourth; or you are trying to convince us that you cannot talk or write. If the latter, you have succeeded. Congratulations.
Tintagiles on The Cross Foxes by Gwyrfab 30 Oct 2002, 9:07 PM
Wonderful. Wish I had been there. I just wish you bally Welsh could come up with a way of writing your damn words so that other people could figure out how to say them...
bondjedi on An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva 30 Oct 2002, 9:13 PM
This is prose
bondjedi on some deleted poem 30 Oct 2002, 9:14 PM
the essence of the education system. a masterpiece!
xanthippe on i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus 30 Oct 2002, 10:03 PM
love it :P
royalflesh on some deleted poem 30 Oct 2002, 11:30 PM
next time baby...make sure she sits next to you and gives you one a those good 'ol high school blow jobs. k?
horus8 on some deleted poem 30 Oct 2002, 11:31 PM
this is going straight to the worst list with gold wings...congradulations..i have a fealing you want it that way..so i'll help...let me know...cuz i care..that much 0. nice shape...reminds me of peeing in a snow bank in cursive.
royalflesh on An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva 30 Oct 2002, 11:32 PM
to mine understand-ith, thuse attund a face di atimus. most definitely as one may compose. prose. if not mistaken-ith. (sick)
royalflesh on A little song by kawakurdi 30 Oct 2002, 11:37 PM
u sir, make human-stuffy afraid. watch your back and balls next time you step up to the urinal. pillow. please.
horus8 on An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva 31 Oct 2002, 12:47 AM
change last line "like" her to "than" her...it would be great...have a nine also.. and it is prose, but so what....just list it next time as other.
horus8 on before bethlehem by royalflesh 31 Oct 2002, 2:43 AM
stanza seven...line 6 "very"....that's brilliant...social security checks for the well manured...and perhaps a motor home trip to the four corners...10.
horus8 on realities <from above their brilliance is short-lived> by royalflesh 31 Oct 2002, 2:50 AM
make it a brick mosaic, so you lose the double use of the word mud and fix the mispell, maybe violet to violent? the "vodka mumble" is quite quotably delicious and...than lose the last stanza entirely...good luck...and thanks for the vodka mumble..i will use it well..d
horus8 on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot 31 Oct 2002, 2:56 AM
you kept my interest so...keep the eight. 8. do a series of these...they're damn good.8.l
razorgrin on i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus 31 Oct 2002, 2:23 PM
awesome.
razorgrin on Avetis by KilIluminati 31 Oct 2002, 2:26 PM
"u" suck, as does this poeme. If it was spelled right and you took out about 40 of those fnords ,maybe it wouldn't make me want to vomit. Oh well. That will remain a mystery for the ages.
Tintagiles on untitled by skinda 31 Oct 2002, 7:00 PM
'Don't make me angry/I'll only get mad'? Sheer idiocy. Of course you'll get mad if they make you angry. Stop repeating yourself.
Tintagiles on some deleted poem 31 Oct 2002, 7:03 PM
So wise. Have you written a single poem that doesn'T inform us that you know what life's all about? You're some sort of guru. Teach me. Please.
Tintagiles on A little song by kawakurdi 30 Oct 2002, 9:02 PM
Awww...
Nicholas Jones on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot 31 Oct 2002, 4:29 AM
This is how Holby City should be.