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knickytoy on sex by Limness 18 Oct 2002, 12:41 PM
Did you just change the title?C
vulcan on On the Swings by Christof 18 Oct 2002, 8:36 AM
10!
cobalt on sex by Limness 18 Oct 2002, 12:32 PM
he was that bad?
knickytoy on Loosed by <~> 18 Oct 2002, 11:49 AM
Whoa! What the hell is going on Z????
god'swife on some deleted poem 18 Oct 2002, 10:02 AM
You crack me up.
knickytoy on On the Swings by Christof 18 Oct 2002, 11:58 AM
Service with a smile (and gritted teeth!) Great imagery but the tone makes it.??
Bachus on Libra by Rex Karrs 18 Oct 2002, 12:50 PM
yeah. that would make you a libra alright.neither a 1 0r a 3, but a 2..the middle of the monther. the strongest part of the sign. happy birthday. do a scale test later in the day to check for longterm wear. happy harvest and gestatual finish.
knickytoy on sex by Limness 18 Oct 2002, 12:54 PM
How about bootie call?
god'swife on purple and black gangstaz theme tune by rosiebailey 18 Oct 2002, 9:07 AM
I love " fastest rapper..." This poem reminds of Langston Hughes. I haven't read him in a while, i should do that. Very good.
god'swife on Ode to Larkbeat Twoshoes by Nicholas Jones 18 Oct 2002, 9:23 AM
I must be in a good mood, everything looks brilliant today. My only peeve is the use of 'time' twice and the end of a line.
god'swife on When Your Best Friend Says You Drink Too Much by jessicazee 18 Oct 2002, 10:12 AM
Your previous 2 were so good, my expectations are not met with this one, but I can see it in there, like a red speck in an egg. The last stanza is my favorite. Trying starting with that one and see were it leads, Sugar Dumpling.
knickytoy on Libra by Rex Karrs 18 Oct 2002, 11:53 AM
I'm glad to see you haven't laid down your pen! Happy Bday! XO??
Bachus on Ode to Larkbeat Twoshoes by Nicholas Jones 18 Oct 2002, 1:08 PM
refreshingly inaccsessable. congradulations. way to get the reader to be empathetic towards anyone, just a one, in this ode. anyone. maybe james, maybe her, but nay...why, cuz i'm left wondering. why should i give a shit. i pray she keeps both of her shoes?, cuz i truly i'm that interested in the whole lot of you. really. it'll make that big of a difference when i wake up tomorrow. honestly.e
Bachus on When Your Best Friend Says You Drink Too Much by jessicazee 18 Oct 2002, 1:11 PM
The Bachian tribunal choice of the day. odelay!!!!!!!! 10! why, because of the squashed pomegranates and our stained fingers.
knickytoy on Hunt by cobalt 18 Oct 2002, 1:13 PM
What's with the hunting? You and Rexx should compare notes. Ducks vs. Deer: Discuss.
Christof on Loosed by <~> 18 Oct 2002, 7:56 AM
Yes, the target image in the first stanza - of course that links back to 'Bowed'.
god'swife on Loosed by <~> 18 Oct 2002, 8:42 AM
"...bare these sinews" is the only thing that hangs me up here. S3 is gorgeous. Stop running in incestual circles. See some other band. I went to Bob Dylan last night and 2 brothers tried to pick up on me.
god'swife on the girl what gave scott the look by UAFANTHORPEY 18 Oct 2002, 8:47 AM
Some of this is brilliant. Soemof this makes me squirm. I'll have to get use to it and come back to it later.
knickytoy on sex by Limness 18 Oct 2002, 12:12 PM
Safe sex?
god'swife on Loosed by <~> 18 Oct 2002, 8:57 AM
What did you change?