As someone who falls over at least once a day, I can literally feel your pain.

interesting read soccer :o)

Hee hee hee.

I'm taking it that the 'Sole' refers to the solitary?

It's good but I can see why you want to fix it up a bit. I'll print this and stare at it a while. There's nothing obvious.

not so much this, as the others. i'm aware that this is new. it just seems alot of folks were slate wiping these days and i just thought it was oddly coincidental. that's all.for some the devil means something mysteriously vague and bad?it's all about change though, upside down. rightside up is bound by routine unable to change. tied to your ways and past. that's what mr.chows fortune cookie told me yesterday when i went orange chicken crazy..

such pain you speak of god'swife... I pray the storms of sorrow have passed you by... excellent read!

yeah... everyone picks on the fat kid and I don't know why... somebody should teach that kid how to fight back :o)

I like it, Aml; but you could do some selective pruning. Consider this a rambling bush in the garden you can now trim into the shape of a...atomic trio.

this sounds like great fun! who would you like to give a little shove to, christof?

nice job, limonade. concinct. (a word a teacher of mine used to use--concise and succint).

This sounds so familiar... a crook with a smile on his face, saying how great this is and how stupid you'd be without it... great read :o)

Ok, I can't see any problems with this as is. I think you may be poetandknowit toying with me though. Either way I like this piece.9 if you're interested in the scoring

Swing away! If I shut up long enough, would you mentor me?

I liek the idea of the union of Man and Nature even in destruction. That is truly Shelleyan. You do capture the Romantics very well.

I think you keep on resubmitting this one - you must be doing edits I haven't noticed. The ending in particular is very strong.

to search for the one true love. Don'w worry Katie... you'll find him :o) Good poem!

Playful.

great read limonade! :o)

I really like it; perhaps the pushee could end up in the Milky Way black hole.