i liked it...good word use, excellent imagery. overall a good poem

well i guess we'll be going tit for tat. yeah...no structure... a little bit of rhyming...horrible if you really think about it...nah just kiddin...you see what i did there? a 10 i tell you...a 10

This feels strangely about me. I'm not trying to be presumtuous or egotistical, I see myself with relation to poemranker in this. Seriously. Thank you. 8 if you wish.

decent poem...everyday feelings. felt the same way myself

i found it hard to follow. lots of big words though. good vocabulary and such

i think this poem is really good actually i understand what ur trying to say dariana, its a really really good poem

um... let me see what you get..... i'll give you a five for this

Wow, this is so touching... it make me cried. HAHA LOL 7 And seven, you got

*speechless* I just don't get it, is this site not governed in any sorta way, mean or fashion!? Why am I being forced to read this, this bile. Y'see what I did there?...huh d'you see it, I took ya down one road just for ya to be dragged back and took down the real road. I tell ya kid you'll go far, it's another 10 that'll do me, Tommy.

Well it sorta started quite badly, went no where in the middle and tailed off towards the end but apart from that, splendid...great...sterling effort. No sorry justa touch of wry poet humour there (this is steeped in irony, so please don't hunt me down and slay me) liked it liked it a lot 10 will do me, Tommy!

Well this is just utter garbage I mean where was the structure and the meter?...Oh good Lord no this just shan't do...no wait on second read thru...no genius...absolute genius...(Irony Irony Irony) as before love your work...another 10 will do me, Tommy

Very deep and depressing. (Hey everybody, I want to know ur opinion of my poems! Please vote on mine too! thank you very much)

Thats a good case of the blues brotha. (Please vote on mine, I really dont know ppls opinion)

I dont really get alot of vocabulary in that

I understand what you are saying. I dig trenches, you find comfort and seek the innocence in memorys from your past. Both of us avoiding the reality of the present. I can relate.

I got a bit confused somewhere between the third and fourth line.

Good contrast, nice visuals,and that grooovy warm fuzzy feeling to boot.

kool

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Thats true in most cases, but I hope thats not everyone (Please people vote on mine, I dont know what people think. THank you)