crafty

Excellent imagery

Very nice!8

nice, you nailed it, so when do we get to rp!?

this reads purely as prose, and is rather cliche.

i really think this poem has been given too many 10's

depth and ambiguity... lovely

succinct

Forget about her, well go rp together!! LoL. Nice Haiku...even though I'm not sure exactly what Haiku is, I still like it =) I'm blonde don't mind me =)

Good to the point and strangely subtle

Your 21!!LoL I just did the math...well I could be wrong...LoL, but nice poem, I like your point of view 9!! =)

Ryn: No I'm not Darren Day, whoever that fellow might be. Champagne socialists have always been rather laughable, on both sides of the fence. / :

Thanks for your comments. Ummm I hope if I make a couple of suggestions you won't be offended (I fully admit I know nothing about poetry) But if you changed the line ending "horror first began" to "horror did begin" you get a closer match in rhyme. Also the last line should end in the word 'sin' ... something about the night bringing sin maybe Just a couple of thoughts ( :

good concept... but remeber that thoughts are not yours, they are your brain... just watch thm come and go.... like watching a t.v. show

islam and some fucked up maniacs have no connection.... islam like is a great relegion, just like all relegions.... unfornutely it is used too many times as an excuse... but this is noting new.... politics always use organizations for their own requirments... sad world sometimes....

wonderfull.... i like the rythm... and i love the content... i'm a gemini by the way, so i know what u mean... but i have not yet realized which of the twins is the evil one....

interesting angle on a subject broached by few and tainted with disdain by maintream media

man i wanna crawl up in a corner and die... Well done..!!!!

hmmmm

Perfect!I'm happy I checked your poems!and found this strange artistic monument there!(there's no exaggeration on my part,I've read enough poetry to see what is good and what Perfect!)10