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on Sympathy for a Pig by phbiscuit
5 Oct 2002, 10:50 PM
i couldn't.
don't do it johnnie. i may be a zzinnia, but who amongst you can vouchsafe my beauty, or lack thereof? and therefore, how can you compare her to me, or mrs.g, or razor? well, i guess you can since all's fair in love and poetry... except for you, h, you tease. the mp3's don't work, yeh wee bastard!
try now...z...go for dear ms.sexton..i was just listening to it..it worked fine...hey flatliner. nice poem.
I think this is nicely shaped prose rather than poetry, but that's an observation rather than a criticism. Very nice, but I don't like the word f-hole.
This is pants. Really, really pants. I'm very bored of people using sex to try and be shocking. Very tedious.
Beautiful! I give it a 10+.
To make light of a situation which takes many lives every day is rather disgusting. What is your point?
Ignorance is bliss. This could have been so much. Sorry, but it is how I feel.
I got lost in the length.
Dariana
on The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle
6 Oct 2002, 5:17 AM
Ridiculous!
Touching.
The spelling is of no big issue to me because I felt the depth of emotion displayed here.
I enjoyed this.
Are you Darren Day?
your words and your hearth are in tune
this poem is very... brazen of you, Brazen