New Life Drug
on Why? by Bazilla
2 Oct 2002, 6:11 PM
WHY!?
8/10
9/10
you, sirrah, are neither a gentleman nor a scholar, and that's exactly why i want you.
Much better and more flowing this time! ...And man 'o' man don't we all hate Stalkers!!! Awesome poem though( makes me wonder if that did happen to you though and if it did I do apologize for that happening)!!! 10
fire...
...but this haiku smells nuthin' but fine, fine, fine. I believe the term most widely accepted in academe is fiddle. As in, Ah do believe ahm fixin' tuh play this'n here fiddle. If you do rosin up the bow, be sure and do your best Irish American tribute with a hearty round of Lannigan's Ball. Thereafter, Fox on the Run.
Wishing you a good night's sleep, Babs.
I cant have one of those, I'm allergic. Cute and full of love.
Boy I hate erring on the side of safety! But then it's safer that way. How redundant.
I have no idea which way to go with this.... my head hurts.
Are you in nashville perm or is this wErkkk? I've been through there and I have thought many a time to visit the grand ole opry, but haven't done it yet.
First of all, it's 72 virgins I'll dream of, thank you very much. Secondly, I choose option F: Stand up, laugh your head off, moon the whole of New York, and start dancing through the isles to the tune of 'I Will Survive', timing it so that the impact with the building will come a split second after a reiteration of the refrain.
A sawn-sided shack? A hillside? :::Starts singing..., " Over the river and through the woods to Grandma's House we go...::: Ok but still needs some work man...I don't like to be left hanging and I felt that it was missing something. 3
Ok now you started it off really good until about the 3rd Stanza then it kinda lost the sense of emotions and jumped into a cold-hearted ocean with the 4th Stanza which seemed too sudden but I still understand what you're getting at where as others may not but i'll let ya go on this one since I felt your pain. 6
I dunno about the befriending your enemy part but if you say so then uhhh...ok. Other then that its a Happy-Go-Lucky poem and I like it alot! 9
Man...Talk about being stabbed in the back!( Someone wanna twist that knife in my back around a few more times please? thankyou! )As for the transitions they are a bit sketchy but other then that they are pretty flowing and straight to the point so that makes a heck of alot of sense. Keep it up. Great Write. 9 Again!
What in the world does it mean?
i cannot comment on this now. but, i will.