INTRANSIT
on American Poem by ASTRO-GLIDE
26 Sep 2002, 9:47 AM
GLIDE ON BROTHER!!!!!!!
Nice, I liked it a lot-9/10
YES! YES! YES! LIFE IN DEATH! SPIRITS NEVER DIE!
Where is this bar? I'm always out looking for it.
If that were true, you wouldn't be here. Take heart,but go deeper.
Ok, What the hell is wrong with you? Do you lose women like I lose my car keys and wallet or what? Thats two in one day!7
Is your friend polish? Hilarious!9
Any thing that makes me laugh gets high marks. Ishould try "medicating".
What would happen if you changed the last line to "trick"? Too fun!
Glad not every one is so serious.
There have been comments about the "Chinese" nature of the haiku------What is it that is so Chinese about the poem? Pi? booth 3? Please explain, because I don't get it. Thanks.
Doug Soderstrom
DO YOU MIND?!!!!! I'm trying to enjoy my last hunnert or so minutes before I have to leave.....
7-10-7 HAIKU? Spring rules!!!!
why did it take so long for this to sink in? i need a nap, i guess. either that or a speedball.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2002, 9:26 AM
who the hell gave this a one? nice work. the last line makes it.
And you say you don't have "it".
POSH!!!!When you do that I "see" you. Keep on keepin' on!
THAT'S gonna lead to trouble. Why do women need men when they have cell phones?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2002, 9:34 AM
no woman is worth this (the poem, not suicide).
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2002, 9:36 AM
i don't know what the hell is, but you can do better.
yehaa you get an 8 my friend
Now that's lost! Funny.