knickytoy
on A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom
26 Sep 2002, 2:16 PM
This is a poetical website, not political.
this unfortunately is a lyric, emphasis on unfortunately.
hope within the belly? you mean below the belly, i'm sure
Isn't it cool this guy can describe the sea!i think im gonna give you atleast a 0 for typing letters out.
I'm lost
Yeah i bet u wish u was a fairy
A breath of fresh air! (and a big snowman for you!!)
Most auspicious daddio!
Gorgeous. If I were you I'd try for something more novel then "Runs like the wind"
I like its simplicity.
This is what I wanted to hear, feel and see tonight.
You have managed to post at least 10 poems that all say the same thing the same way. Why not just make them one long epic pimple poem and be done with it. and the problem is that you mange to tell us everything and show us nothing. "I'm sad today, I was sad yesterday, and I was sad the day before that." And wrap it all up in words best left in Harry Potter books. Yes, I read them to my daughter. And if Rowling was a depressive and whined a whole hell of a lot, it would sound in the same vain as this. "That girl she broke my fragile heart, the torment of loneliness now envelops the torment of my ravaged soul, the tunnel closes before me, the shadowy light of demons now and demons past that devastate my dark desolate, dilapidated, decrepit, lonely, thoughts in the darkness of my murky loneliness like the black demise that is the darkness of this lone shadow and the blackhead that won't pop and the gun cliched cold steel against my cliched cold temple. Oh fucking woe that girl, that girl is eating away at the trigger. If I pull, if I tug, tug, tug, she we remember me always. She will remember what she did to me in my forsaken hour. God good. Write something different.
my prediction's...this will be the pile of shite at number three on the worst list in two months...just a prediction.
having a nuke is one thing..guiding it in from 10,000 miles away, another...i wouldn't worry to much if i were you doug...your mail will still be delivered, just never again with the same smile... take the comaout after too, and place it after saddam instead.. more advice..never right simplisticly about politics, war or religion...it turns your shadow into a tailess puppy dog hand puppet..
brought a tear to my eye, my trust in you has grown stout once again..10! HORUS8 PRIZE FOR the APPLE OF HIS EYE, AND THE ENDLESS POINTLESS SHOE FILL STEREOTYPE.. you just might be a dead great famous composer yet.
a murder of crows, the scrotismal equinox...why do we refer to the moon as a woman and the sun as a man? in that question is enlightment, i'm glad i could give two shits now..death is the only outcome regardless if the lights are on or off. 7.
I believe you do capture. L's 7&8, S3, could be deleted. They detract slightly from not adding.
compact and clever
the ol' 9-3-1 haiku. of course!