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Christof on The Class of 2012 by jess33 23 Sep 2002, 4:01 AM

I agree with your point and your ending but I wonder if it could do with some cutting earlier on?

Christof on Night Photograph by jess33 23 Sep 2002, 4:02 AM

But that hope must be dashed soon afterwards? There is a loneliness behind this poem that I really like.

Christof on A Short Message to You by jess33 23 Sep 2002, 4:05 AM

Some of the phrasing I find a bit awkward - 'pushing the envelope' is too much a cliche, and the 'parochial underdog' scans uneasily - but what you are saying is very good. It's this kind of thing that put me off God completely but it's good to argue with him like this and keep your faith if you can.

Christof on Surprise by edge 23 Sep 2002, 4:06 AM

Cake? Is this a joke? I'm baffled

Christof on My Office by Tascobar 23 Sep 2002, 4:11 AM

This is the story of every office worker in the world. On the button.

Christof on Love and Marriage in Da Nang by Tascobar 23 Sep 2002, 4:13 AM

Well, I like it, even though Joseph Heller got there first.

Christof on Mommy, why does -=DarkAngel=- use 'an' so much? by <{Baba^Yaga}> 23 Sep 2002, 4:20 AM

I'm sure Dark Angel is delighted with this. But you didn't put 'e' on the end of prawn.

Christof on No insurance? No treatment! by <{Baba^Yaga}> 23 Sep 2002, 4:24 AM

I pity the poor fool who gets in a cab with you. This is a pretty focussed rant, you swipe at evything worthing swiping at.

INTRANSIT on Faded by aperfecttool77 23 Sep 2002, 5:17 AM

Awareness is important, action is more. Good product. Go deeper!

INTRANSIT on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore 23 Sep 2002, 5:24 AM

Good stuff! Tree sap color? A girls broken heart? I like poems that lend themselves to 2 way thoughts. 8

INTRANSIT on suffer the child by edge 23 Sep 2002, 5:43 AM

Oh how I hate pain and suffering. However as a lyric this does fly pretty easily. Can't think......8

INTRANSIT on Pilgrim by timfowler 23 Sep 2002, 5:47 AM

A quietly powerful piece. Quite good acually. I'll leave it to others more Knowledgeable than I to "harsh your gig".8

INTRANSIT on Punishment and Punishment again by vulcan 23 Sep 2002, 5:49 AM

Sooooooo much with sooooo little. This is artful!!!!!! 9

INTRANSIT on Me and She. by peach835 23 Sep 2002, 5:52 AM

Circ-ular! Love it! Fun! Poignant too.8

Christof on Pilgrim by timfowler 23 Sep 2002, 5:58 AM

I like the crude sculptor of mountains.

Christof on some deleted poem 23 Sep 2002, 6:01 AM

What is roath?

Christof on the silent storm by mallory180 23 Sep 2002, 6:05 AM

I don'think you need to spellout that you don't want to live in the past-your message would be obvious if you just said that theat you decided to turn away from your old house - you only need to show,not tell.

INTRANSIT on When The Iron Curtain Came Down by RoseEyes 23 Sep 2002, 5:33 AM

The"walls" went up late, then came down quickly.First group seems a little off. Easy to read,liked it.7

some deleted user on Ouch by heroditus 23 Sep 2002, 5:38 AM

Hurray! One for the lads

INTRANSIT on .:|bittersweet|:. by emman 23 Sep 2002, 5:38 AM

This has a subtle power,and 3 idea possibilities.Alittle ironing, simplification and BOOM! it's there. 8