-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on some deleted poem
6 Sep 2002, 7:16 AM
You should be shot in the groin, god'swife.
Uandulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
Unadulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
==Doylum
on Our lord and saviour, the land of 60 million micks, as wonderful and noble as the pink empire. by ==Doylum
6 Sep 2002, 7:09 AM
ps who the fuck gave this a 5?
Yes irony in an Alanis Morissette stylee.
Unadulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
Unadulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
I hope you didn't spend too long writing this, as it is pure toss. Random words thrown together do not make poetry. 3/10. I've seen worse, but not much.
==Doylum
on Our lord and saviour, the land of 60 million micks, as wonderful and noble as the pink empire. by ==Doylum
6 Sep 2002, 7:06 AM
I knew you'd like them, Fortnum and Mason don't ye know. They are a bit of a problem though, i keep forgetting about them and they tend to catch on doors jambs and latches and suchlike its also a pain when logging in i don't know how dirk does it all the time. I may have to remove them later if it all becomes to much. However i am pleased with them, so for now they can stay. Lots of love from the all new jobless but wing-ed {--=Doylum=--}
Yeah! 2 computers, subscriptions to 2 different ISPs, 2 sets of telecommunication hardware, and 2 usernames, just so I can give myself some backup on poemranker! HA HA ha oh poetandknowit, I'm sure you were joking all along though right?
I also stay up 24 hours a day, logged into poemranker. And I have 3 telephone lines.
There is no poetry here. I searched for hours with a magnifying glass and tweezers. No poetry.
It's natural rather than Ironic(Great?)but the irony and fatalism lies in one's being called Steph and his being Deaf(The ironic rhyme of it)you meant this?Bravo!7
I think we'll have to agree to disagree. School isn't perfect, but the alternative is mass illiteracy and the end of civilisation. Or something.
Turtle. That's the closest I can get. But really, who cares?
I'm afraid my comment will be in plain old English - but I like this, it is both zesty and lusty and therefore thoroughly to be recommended. Yum!
Ah the Purple Turtle, a most hallowed place, and an old favorite, why did they knock it down? why did they move it? Why banish it up town. A most mystical of places, no more. Howl howl howl, you are determined to bring darkness into my world. Oh well whats for supper.
I like your thinking - you may be young, you may also be wierd, but I'll follow your work. 8. Also nothing rhymes with "orange", which pisses me off.
This is quite funny. Yep.
thank you very much Christof