by the way, i didn't toss you the goose egg.

Were havin a gang bang were havin a ball were havin a gang bang against the wall

thank you for pointing that out,I hadn't relized that I left the 's' out of the title

I can tell you have alot of talent,I'm being sarcastic

sorry?

yeah big fat zero, ye big fat zero. you make me weep. mother bring a tissue. No not really 10/10

Oh do stop reposting your super lovely good time poems, let the masses stumble on them as if by chance, than they would gain more enjoyment, and we could all explode in the the great enjoyment of fiscal south african queens

I liked it

thats what counts? if you don't know what its about whats the point? Oh lovely use of words, sorry i don't get you but it was rather well argued wasn't it chaps? Yelp. What was that, oh i think it was a little puppy. Frass i think your super. 7/10

Thank you for the compliment

ok if i'm wrong please give me a full explanation, if so you've failed, cause even if you don't want to appeal to the lowest common denominator you surely want to at least appeal to the supremly lackluster. If my synopsys is right what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed,what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed,what more critique do you needed. Just remember Ramu and Sita, rodger red hat, and billy blue balls

betwixt??? What is wrong with between? Is betwixt more "poetic" "intelligent" "thoughtful" "revealing"? wishfully impending??? It is regretable how many of you dis-embowel the poignancy right out of your very own ideas. You must not even be aware how high-hatted your writing style is to have print this. 0

If your lucky. Would you mind terribly actually making a critique of the poem. Few people read me and even fewer add any words of advice. I thank you in advance.

Betwixt is an super word and has only become despised cause not many people use it. The more people use it the more they hear it the better they like it the more it gets used. Its like Gas instead of petrol, and sidewalk instead of pavement who cares so long as we know what you mean. Otherwise nasty

It's hard for me to rank this... It's clever and not at all pretentious, which on this sight are rare commodities. If I had 2 I'd give one to you, is a gem of a rhymn, I don't get the last line though. Is your girlie getting one because she's turning into something undesirable, or because she' a transexual? In the opoem I mean. 7

Yes the unpretentious can see for miles, and yes my ryhmes are sublime thank you for your rank

Dylm, I don't like your bilious tripe, nor that of DA, H8, or any of the other roach spray sniffers on this site. Shove off and good riddance to yas.

i haven't had a drink in minutes dearest my liver is in tip top condition. I'm afraid i can't accept your offer of a date i'm otherwise engaged on that night, but do keep trying and one day i may be able to fit you in.

so to sum up I'm a right case and i can even decide how to end it. Yes?

super lovely