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on Darkness by KathrynR
15 Aug 2002, 4:31 PM
Sorry Kathryn, when I read your 1st poem Idid not realise your tender years and would now change my mark to 9.This one also is excellent and deserves another 9.Keep it up.Now get TO BED!!!.
I like the way babbit has fomented discussion amongst the rest of us with his artistry.
Oh, Doylum. When will you learn that it's not who has the dog and the hotels, but how long it takes before one loses all one's money and throws the board across the room in anger?
No -=Jo90=- i do not suggest she reads your poems, I would caution her about a great deal on this site,i simply suggest that by commenting on her poem and then saying don't look at my poem she will/won't do exactly what your official or was that unoffical persona said not to do not.
You need to sit down and take a chill pill. The reason I don't vote is this: It's completely pointless. Not only are votes regularly wiped out by poetes editing their poemes, and not only is any one person's vote washed away in a sea of bad judgment, but what function does it serve? What does it tell the poete about his poeme? Do high votes mean "it's good"? Do low votes mean "it's bad"? No. They do not. You and I both know that almost all of the poemes on this site have scores that are wildly incorrect. The author gains nothing; the voter gains nothing. That is why I don't vote. Perhaps you will find some vague, sarcastic, meaningless counterargument to that which nobody can argue against because there isn't anything to argue against, but perhaps you won't. Anyway. On to the rest of your really excellent comment. 1. I don't actually care what you feel about feeling. Was this addressed to me, or someone else, or just your awe-dience in general? Your constant fervent attempts to relate other people's poemes to your own incredibly exciting life are as about as stimulating as watching the results of you composing yet another pointless, carbon-copy "slam"-fest filled with (if we're lucky) images that are not original, evocative, salient, meaningful to anyone but you, or even considered. If we're not lucky, they're just filled with total bollocks. 2. Your life as an actor holds this much interest for me: nearly none. I say 'nearly' because once I did a search on 'horus8' to see if you really had done any acting. 3. Your fictions about the kale gun are this entertaining: not. 4. Please stop abusing the beak, as it is mine and I have promised to look after it. You may use the bastard inverted cousin of the beak since you appear to own it. 5. My name is "-=Dark_Angel=-" and I will thank you to address me as such. I have spent an unbelievable amount of time and money in court getting it legally changed and YOU WILL RESPECT IT. 6. Your stoned tourette's syndrome outbursts are, I'm sure, really great, but I for one have stopped reading them, and I don't really know if anyone does, so you might want to consider swearing at someone who cares. You can address your next comment essay to same. Have a good one!!!!
A consciousness raising poem; thank you, Corey. At my alma mater, George Mason U., bands of feral cats wander the campus, howling like lonely, lost soul choirs every night. Students regularly throw cats out at the end of the semester.
I'm noones sirrah my dear, i thank you to refrain from patronising me even though i am a poor wretch. Who chafed your mammary or perhaps memory. does it smart i know i'm not i see no lessons cept that to be red is good to be green is bitter. Listen to the propaganda it teaches how to make a ripe plum, but helps to keep the flowers shut.
()-Dirk-Angle~} got a monk on. Come out to play %^Dirk??" don't get all testy on every one, just cause yev got bottom problems, sooth them with cream, we'll all have such fun, and be friends again, you can play your guitar if you like.
Yes, here on poemsmilecomfortdon'tupsetanyoneranker we like to give people votes that reflect their effort, not their actual "achievement". Yes, yes, I know, it's ridiculous to expect an 11 year old to produce poems that are comparable to that of a talented and experienced adult. I mean well done and all, but what is the last line doing? I doubt that darkness is light's worst enemy. It may be its antithesis, but, like, do all binary relationships between personified elements of nature have to be (im)mortal emnity? Also, it's "light", not "lightness", just for future reference. Other comments: Lovely imagery about darkness's favourite game, but how many times have you actually been scared out of your wits by the dark bits in your notepads? Actually I liked that bit... personification is so absurd to begin with that making it more absurd can only be good.
"Keep up the good work"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your hilarious misspelling of my name have me in stitches Doylum! Keep up the hilarious work!!!! P.S. I would have thought such an ironic person as yourself could SPOT A LITTLE FUCKING IRONY NOW AND THEN (LIKE IN THAT COMMENT TO HORUS8 I JUST DID THAT'S WHAT I MEAN!!!)
=-Dirk90-== explains his word for me just incase i don't understand them, he has a monopoly on bitting comment and irony, one must head them or he'll have your hotels and your little dog too
Well, would you suggest that KathrynR look at my poemes? I wouldn't. In fact I would suggest that she not look at them. P.S. This is my official stance, not my actual stance. Because I'm so incredibly zany and subversive that not only do I have an 'official' stance which differs from my 'real' stance, I wackily acknowledge this fact in public (no doubt in a stage whisper!!!!!!!!!!!!!)!!!!! P.P.S. These are the most hilarious misspellings yet! You've really hit my weak point! Congratulations on spotting that I really, genuinely do care about the spelling of my name! Because I do care! About the spelling! A lot! I do! Care! Come fly with me let's fly let's fly away...something something something something something something gay!!
This is the most original poeme I have ever read. The title is AMAZING. "Your eyes are like the ocean"... great line. "The way you walk / The way you talk"... great use of 'walk' to rhyme with 'talk'!!! Great work skaterdude396! Excellent, mate! Not only are you a way cool, l33t skate dude, you also have time for feelings! Because you know, feelings are important too, aren't they?
Now you're cooking with KY, DA. Supersize it, keep it coming. Zzin got a little naughty, you got a little arty. Perhaps the 'mature' poets and phlegm hockers can...just get along.
Finest poem about an electric guitar I've ever seen. TEN!!
Very involving; pulling in the attention of a computer user used to flitting from one thing to the next. Methinks you're a prose writer, as well.
Tuesday
Look, to be honest, I don't give a... care if she looks at them or not. I was simply "covering my behind". Which at the moment is uncovered, as you might expect. Good day to you, Sir.
walkfreakinwhitman, your sarcasm is so biting that you may have given me gaybies.