Oh my god did i enter the same thing more than once? Maybe because it sounds like the LAST 2 LINES OF THE POEM?

This frightens me. I must read more.

I dont see snow much thank you

To me it sound stupid and means nothing! And what's up with this repeating everything(almost everything) twice? take a look at the last 2 lines of the poem they both mean the same thig except one is slang for the other! To me it sounds like he wrote this while he was taking a piss! Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss thr toilet when ur doing ur business ok? we dont want anything getting on the floor! because then ur gonna have to write a poem about that too!

Nice stuff, some excellent moments and visuals. It took three days of looking but I finally found a decent poem on this site. Could use a bit of tightening, but can???t we always find something to rewrite.

To me it sound stupid and means nothing! And what's up with this repeating everything(almost everything) twice? take a look at the last 2 lines of the poem they both mean the same thig except one is slang for the other! To me it sounds like he wrote this while he was taking a piss! Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss thr toilet when ur doing ur business ok? we dont want anything getting on the floor!

To me it sound stupid and means nothing! And what's up with this repeating everything(almost everything) twice? take a look at the last 2 lines of the poem they both mean the same thig except one is slang for the other! To me it sounds like he wrote this while he was taking a piss! Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss thr toilet when ur doing ur business ok? we dont want anything getting on the floor! because then ur gonna have to write a poem about that too!

Welcome to life. Child. Don't push. Pull. Pull me out. I have drugs and park benches gallore. In fact mother says I can have a slumber party this weekend! Do you have friends. I don't, so bring some, and I will provide you with your weakness. Living life! You can't say no to anything that destroys you. You don't love yourself, but I love you! Yes I love the weak. Yes, I love you! More than you'll ever know. We love you. Your poem lingers like my stink finger. Salutations. Meander on.

Such a old withered up fisherman. I have you know that all of my poems are fiction! if they are real i put more into them and im sorry to hear that ur life is full of confused thoughts dead fish,park benches and drugs but mine is not! anywho thanx for the comment!

Engaging, sick, and wrong - enjoyed it!

To mention Lumley and lovecraft in the same sentence let alone paragraph should be punishable by death. If I wasn't laughing so fucking hard right now I would take the time to explain why, but I'm not, but I do have your one finger answer right here. See it! Brian Lumley ohhhhh. Hah. Hah. Oh dear me! You are flattering! Hahhhh.

It is clear to me that this guy obviously hasent had any kind of interaction whith a female in a long time so he writes about what he wants to do to the women that he will never meet or talk to.

to bitch, or not to bitch..that is the question. what was the answer..ah..yes.one finger indeed, and thumbless ye remain.i

He watched her skate board by daily. But mother wont let him go outside and play! We'll have to fix mother later. Let's concentrate on the young one outside for now. While we play with our anaconda. Don't spit at her just yet Mr.snake. We still haven't coaxed her inside yet. We still haven't felt her insides yet. Not yet, but soon. Yes. Soon. Sooner then she thinks. Be right there mother! I must go. Ollie high. Grind far. I'll see you soon. You'll pet my Gar!

This poem means absoutly nothing! And what's up with repeating everything(almost everything)twice? : how does this sound: But i must pee first.I must piss first? To me that sounds stupid repeating everythin tiwce. To me it sounds like he wrote this poem while he was in the restroom taking a piss!( Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss the toilet when ur in the potty!

THAT IS JUST SO GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.KEEP OF THE BIG D>>>>>>>>>

To me it sound stupid and means nothing! And what's up with this repeating everything(almost everything) twice? take a look at the last 2 lines of the poem they both mean the same thig except one is slang for the other! To me it sounds like he wrote this while he was taking a piss! Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss thr toilet when ur doing ur business ok?

and you are one of the biggest. HORUS8

good god!

Really moving. Last line is perfect.