razorgrin
on -=Dark_Angel=- & The Canon Episcopi by Bachus
9 Aug 2002, 12:11 PM
The fact that you just cut and pasted and then added some of your tripe proves that you have all of the originality of Milli Vanilli minus the funky-ass hair. Indeed, you fail.
I think ebola while being eaten alive by the undead might be worse than this, but I could well be mistaken.
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yours is more involved with the mental processes involved. I like this one.
Please comment about poems not people. (As a side note, if you are going to comment about others and make fun of their spelling please get a simple word like Canada right.)
Razorgrin I like the poem and I am familiar with the works of H.P. Lovecraft and Brian Lumley. The adventures of Titus Crow and the Cthulhu Mythos are great reads. Nice work.
Great poem. That's if you're in middle school and still enjoy bickering. I hope you two kiss and make up at some point.
Sticks and stones are free
Don't hate the poem hate me!
Cuz I love you tramp
Point taken and sentiment shared. Parts of the poem just seem too much like prose though. Great message, decent poem.
this just sucks ass.
Cock rings are for kids/I hope you're young and nieve/I might rape you too!
I don't think earning 'brownie points' is necessarily the goal here.
(My poem "Jeff" is about suicide too if you'd like to read and comment.)
One night stand?
I do not bicker! I power wash patios and drive ways. I am not a man of integrity. I am indeed a hack! So! God Bless America, and good breeding. Why should I make up with someone that I have no conflict with? I now have a conflict with you though. Prepare!
so let me get this straight you have utter contempt for jews, blacks, and rape women with your friends...rip of other peoples writing (because you can't write) killed your grandparents....and you live in new mexico? you are friends with jesus? which jesus are we talking about here, because mexican drug dealing gang bangers do not constitute the son of god....you are either completely contemptuous of not only yourself, but the entire human race, or socially retarded...what? shoes to tight..mom a whore?..get over it..you reek of puss and self loathing, and because of this your written words have no meaningful points within their polluted presense. you are beyond the mark of failure! you are incomplete and absent. p.s you deserve a shaq attack in your arse.why couldn't you have been on the platform that fell in the shark tank? Because trailer trash has not enough money to travel..and not enough memory to count. in all definitions of the that word..good day, sir
this should be a "get well soon card" the bravo channel will do your biography. you will seperate the gonads with your cleaving toe.where they fall, we still don't know? lovely flow my fine weathered friend....i am spilling the bongwater..now i must..imust..refill.good day!
to many bitchings and to many little shitchings. wright more do not turn away
Great images, fuzzy picture.