Venus
on some deleted poem
9 Aug 2002, 9:33 AM
Beautiful
I am going to take that as a compliment :) Thank you
shine on, you crazy quantity
yoda jr.yoda jr.yoda jr. it would be pointless and slumming in my mind to retort. therefore, i shall instead compliment you on your incredible ability to speak so clearly, so in depth, and all with out a tongue!
(he lost it giving cpr to a seizure stricken fellow Mcdonald's employee) you my friend are a trooper. grunt with pride! sign with joy! your love of your fellow man goes beyond the call of duty. the extra mile. this buds for you. <brought to you by tic-tic the only insecticide breath mint created to date accidentally.>
WHAT HE SAID
Very satisfyingly riveting if I do say so myself. Lovely in a saucy way, you should read my poem entitled "My Sun", it's uses a similar homophonomical metaphor... Da1, the happily misunderstood?
philosophical
this is hard big bro.. ONE, Da1
The spelling is Poem*. this sounds like it should be in a very old chinese movie.
Your personality reminds me of a bitter person. You can take that as a bad thing
this does have a nice flow to it. she knows already; that's why she loves you.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
9 Aug 2002, 9:38 AM
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I find this quite ironic, that you are criticizing people about the way they are not criticizing in a "constructive"
way. Yet you yourself aren't exactly doing that either... Am I the only one who finds humor in this?
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I think a lot of you are stuck up your own arse, you think you know everything about poetry but half of you dont have a clue about anything, try expanding your minds and try to criticise constructively instead of being so negative and nasty to people all the time. Grow up.
go ahead , say humour if you mean humour
WTF? I think this is what the guy does in the morining and he thought that we would actually be interested in his pathetic morining exercises that he does when no one is looking! But i will give this poem a 5 since it made me laugh really really hard!
Mom. It only hurts when I read. My iguana 'screw-fly the bold' likes this enough for a ten, but I ran out of beer and the shakes are coming in, so I accidentilly pushed 7. I'm a #2 pencil kinda guy.
u suck horus, good poem jody well done
cunnilinctus???
Saucilistic. off the hook in a variety of ways... peep my brother and I's lyric,"U Owe Me 5 Rocks & 2 Pebbles".... I smell a collaboration, holla back youngin',Da1