Re: Your Words by TLRufener	Dovina 69.175.32.104	19-Dec-05/4:31 PM
Sounds like you have exaggerated what really happened by thinking about it in too much negativity. Would he really "laugh in my face To reinforce my every fear"?
Re: Pledge by D. $ Fontera	Dovina 69.175.32.104	20-Dec-05/12:25 PM
Verses 1 and 2 set it off very nicely. Then it muddles into something apparently important to you, but not very understandable as written.
Re: Aisle by the bread counter by Caducus	Dovina 69.175.32.104	20-Dec-05/12:20 PM
Finally, you're writing plainly, understandably, as if convinced. And still it is warm.
Re: Unconscious by MacFrantic	Dovina 69.175.32.104	20-Dec-05/12:28 PM
I wish I knew what you are talking about. It sounds like it might be interesting.
Re: Unbroken Horses by Caducus	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	19-Dec-05/4:05 PM
There was a time when men were hard living, gritty, stubborn SOB's and women were everyday saints. It was a different time that called for a different kind of people. Do not judge or praise them by today's standards. They did what they felt they had to do.
Re: Blackout, Amman, November, 2005 by zodiac	cyan9 217.40.63.105	22-Dec-05/4:09 AM
My cup of tea
Re: philosophy of a new age by crazyknight	Dovina 69.175.32.104	19-Dec-05/5:27 PM
Hold onto the things you believe even though they've been proven wrong. In various times, all things are right or wrong. It's a messed-up philosophy, and it's not even haiku. Or maybe you’re getting at the eastern ideas of self: “The reason I have an enemy is because I have self. If I no longer had a self, I would no longer have an enemy.” Emptiness – the void inside the pot for which the pot was made. And if that’s a bit foreign, try this: “The father is his daughter’s son.” – a Christmas mystery to think about.
regarding some deleted poem...	amanda_dcosta 202.83.45.117	19-Dec-05/6:22 PM
Not bad. I am a nature lover and i appeal to themes like this rather than the emptyheaded flow of words by some poets here, which make no sense. Good work
Re: The Calling by PoeticXTC	Dovina 69.175.32.104	20-Dec-05/7:28 PM
I like the subtlty, the different presentation of an old story, especially the last 5 lines. Welcome to Poemranker. Some suggestions: Heartfelt, they watch Tears of rain. They stand amazed. (Why change person?) Continue they’re gaze.
Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	PoeticXTC 137.139.192.56	20-Dec-05/9:06 PM
lol, nice poem...
Re: Privacy Compromised by Dovina	zodiac 69.132.67.140	21-Dec-05/8:46 AM
cabbage.
Re: Pledge by D. $ Fontera	crazyknight 202.56.231.116	20-Dec-05/10:07 AM
failure
Re: Temptation by PoeticXTC	Dovina 69.175.32.104	20-Dec-05/7:35 PM
Try starting with Line 4 and omitting the first 3 lines. Also, the semicolons are distracting. For example, try, "He speaks the recognizable to my soul." and "Without knowing, he speaks the language of . . ." I like, "My needs stray from his tongue."
Re: Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	PoeticXTC 137.139.192.56	20-Dec-05/8:52 PM
Beautiful poem. I'mma sucker for love myself and this poem is the mirror image of my love for someone else. I truely loved this poem. You have my heart at "..'til the light of me flicker-sighs-..."
Re: Pandora's Box by PoeticXTC	cyan9 217.40.63.105	21-Dec-05/3:35 AM
1st verse is very good, conveys the anger/power well. 2nd verse fades off a bit and is less coherent.
Re: Privacy Compromised by Dovina	crazyknight 202.56.231.116	21-Dec-05/6:57 AM
simple meaning, deep words
Re: Privacy Compromised by Dovina	PoeticXTC 137.139.192.56	20-Dec-05/8:45 PM
Lmao, Im tripping over your last line, krayz!!! "Unmasking faith behind dogma dispelled-slipped hint's of me."- Curious as to what you meant by "... slipped hints of me."
Re: Unbroken Horses by Caducus	crazyknight 202.56.231.116	21-Dec-05/7:11 AM
never forget the salt in life for its what gives the taste to the adventure.
Re: Never Let Go Again by TLRufener	cyan9 217.40.63.105	22-Dec-05/3:59 AM
Oh the drama of it all, how will I ever go on living without you? well, Frankly my dear, I dont give a damn.
Re: It's Time by PoeticXTC	crazyknight 202.56.231.116	21-Dec-05/7:05 AM
Its time u realise, time is not important. For the finite, it doesn't really matter, for it really makes no difference. For the infinite, it doesn't really matter, for its there and there..........