regarding some deleted poem...	tisa7 205.188.116.139	18-Jul-05/4:14 PM
or to like
regarding some deleted poem...	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.25.148	19-Jul-05/2:03 AM
utterly disgusting spelling.
Re: The sunset sea. by darby pyn	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.25.148	19-Jul-05/2:05 AM
Oh my Fucking Howdy! Man...this just plain tires me out. I'm not voting on this.
Re: A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.25.148	19-Jul-05/2:07 AM
Jimmy Buffet said it better. "Wasting away again in Margaritaville..."
regarding some deleted poem...	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.25.148	19-Jul-05/2:09 AM
liquid and casual
Re: CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN by prettyktm	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:43 AM
this makes a good Lyric.
Re: Moving Up by jessicazee	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:46 AM
not sure if the promotion is to her position at home, or if she's been promoted at work. other than that, i like what you've done. but that one part could be clearer.
Re: the smallest box will do by elderking	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:52 AM
very nicely done.
Re: Inoculation by bamf909	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:54 AM
nice elaboration on a theme.
Re: Oh this little mouse, love by cpill	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:56 AM
this has a nice playful feel to it, but "i love you" feels a bit over the top.
regarding some deleted poem...	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:57 AM
nice.
Re: Let the Healing Begin by http://bandgeek	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/7:58 AM
well told.
Re: A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/8:03 AM
somehow i feel this one might have been more effective written from the engineer's point of view.
Re: Break Free by Fayt	<~> 167.206.181.179	20-Jul-05/8:05 AM
and...? i want more from this.
Re: A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	jessicazee 152.163.100.135	20-Jul-05/7:46 PM
tell me why buildable is awesome in the beginning and I will begin to care. I think you have a grand character sketch here if you give it another go.
Re: on passing through some small town by Dental Panic	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	21-Jul-05/7:22 AM
Much better.
Re: The sunset sea. by darby pyn	Nuit 86.128.125.194	21-Jul-05/4:04 PM
I like the depth of your work Darby.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.19.130	19-Jul-05/12:41 AM
Oh. Why'd you post it here, then? PS-Reply to comments by clicking on the green 'Reply' button. That's right next to the red 'X' which you already know about.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 64.160.116.179	20-Jul-05/2:47 AM
“'I’m in love,' I said to you right in front of your mother" Outstanding
Re: she sits back and judges me by hendrimike	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.21.224	20-Jul-05/12:38 PM
f me for reading this.