Re: My Heroes by MacFrantic	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/5:47 PM
Not bad as a Triolet. I usually dislike using thee and lest but but it seems to work ok here.
Re: POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy	Goad 217.226.20.184	31-Jan-05/5:47 PM
Here's a girly with multiple letters, in her name, scorifying her "betters". But of course she's just jealous, she'd love having some fellas -- if she'd only the bits to go get hers!
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/5:49 PM
THings must be pretty desperate when you're plagiarizing fucking Lil' John.
Re: Life by Stacy Stewart	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/5:52 PM
Something about this I like. Not sure what it is.
Re: A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere	SupremeDreamer 66.2.5.19	31-Jan-05/6:05 PM
Sure is more creative and solid than the usual-- "I hate you, you bastard, stabbed me in the heart, I'm stronger, don't need you, you'll regret dumping or cheating on me, blarg, blarg, etc, etc." I almost gave up the hope that somebody would put some thought into an "uprooting" poem. Blessed with eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:23 PM
Like it DGB. You're pretty good at the storytelling poem thing..I'll give you that.
Re: Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:26 PM
That Satan...always tricking people.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:29 PM
I saw the movie..Michael K. Fox...not his best, but it'll do. I don't remember all this from the movieee but ok....
Re: thoughts on a long lazy day by francis nor capule	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:30 PM
better.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:32 PM
Ok, but it seems to me that if your life sucks in the Winter, it's probably still going to suck in the spring..
Re: Psalm of Wonder by Dovina	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:36 PM
Not a bad sentiment here. That God is a funny character. Always doing things to upset the legions of peons that he created. Kind of like an ant farm, we are. Little kid has an ant farm..gets bored, shakes it up and ruins all their tunnels...mmhmm
Re: Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:39 PM
waaaaaaaaaayy too much rhyme for my taste, and forced in places at that. Kind of pretty though in places.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:40 PM
Except for the nothing to look forward to line, this is kind of ok. Not really a lyric yet, but keep working on it.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:42 PM
I must admit it..I have no fucking clue what this is about.
Re: Baghdad Election by Mona Lisa	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:43 PM
Anyone want to place bets on how long it will be before their new president gets blown up?
Re: POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy	Beyond_Dreams 67.51.232.76	31-Jan-05/4:59 PM
way to many grammer mistakes to take this poem even slightly serious. Sounds a bit angsty and should go under pimple poetry.
Re: Never Said Thank You by unouluvme	Beyond_Dreams 67.51.232.76	31-Jan-05/5:03 PM
Yes I agree you have lack of thought in this poem. If you're going to write a poem that everybody writes about you have knock it out of ball feild to make it stand alone and seprate it from the rest. You failed to do that in this poem.
Re: On the Discovery of Cinder Cats and The Road More Traveled by MacFrantic	Goad 217.226.20.184	31-Jan-05/5:05 PM
There was a reader who claimed his frustration because twixt the limericks there was no relation. But he shouldn't complain -- for 't'ain't all who can claim they witnessed dada's revivification!
Re: Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams	Goad 217.226.20.184	31-Jan-05/5:18 PM
Hmm, so just what IS this "depth of illusion" painter's muse? an allusion? delusion? ..ah no, it's in BD's pants, you see it's his little fantasy -- that he has while he rubs his protrusion.
Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	Brittanyy 152.163.100.135	31-Jan-05/5:26 PM
Wait...what? I...I don't get it..Probably all that weed I smoked earlier..Oh well..I'll grant you with a 10..The rule on this site seems to be that all good poems are confusing with all the big..words..and stuff..anyways...Always pass the dutch to the left..Cuz the right way is wrong..PEACE