Re: War Story by dougsoderstrom	horus8 24.130.62.63	6-Jan-05/1:33 PM
Good God man, will you please learn how to fucking write?
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	6-Jan-05/1:35 PM
Right... you give way too many idiots way too much promise. What we need, are more tsunamis.
Re: Affairs by Stacy Stewart	horus8 24.130.62.63	6-Jan-05/1:36 PM
Should start every line with 'tis' And just put this poem entirely out of it's misery instead of dicking around.
Re: Ghostly Rememberance by Beyond_Dreams	horus8 24.130.62.63	6-Jan-05/1:37 PM
Jesus fucking christ. Why weren't you in Asia instead of the dingy supermodel we need more stories like This! 11!
Re: Math Poem 3 by Dovina	ho_hum 129.169.158.91	6-Jan-05/6:18 AM
Not only is the maths in this poem facile beyond belief, principally because you wouldn't know decent maths if it bit you on the arse, but the poem itself it terrible. Doesn't scan, has no rhythm, in fact, apart from being arranged into four, for want of a better word, stanzas, could just be some guffy text. Give us a break with the maths poems.
Re: An Ode To An Angel by Bhaskaryya	AM I EVIL? 24.70.95.203	5-Jan-05/9:28 PM
hey miss dictionary not to bad.....not to bad....o and sorry 4 all the spelling mistakes
Re: Justice Reborn by heartlessempath	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Jan-05/1:49 PM
this is so well written and leaves much room for thought -megan
Re: human by Crakyamuni	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Jan-05/1:51 PM
very nice -mega
Re: An Ode To An Angel by Bhaskaryya	AM I EVIL? 24.70.95.203	5-Jan-05/9:28 PM
hey miss dictionary not to bad.....not to bad....o and sorry 4 all the spelling mistakes
Re: The Christ Omelette by horus8	SupremeDreamer 66.52.156.115	5-Jan-05/9:54 PM
Bravo motherfucker, bravo. The fine cuisine shall be a welcome dish for the pilgrims who journey to the holy city of Ataraxis.
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 64.12.116.67	5-Jan-05/10:01 PM
Very good weaved couplets. This type of poem is not exactly my cup of tea, but you pay attention to construction, which is always worthwile. *7*
Re: Cigarettes and Masturbation by Lifeboatman	MacFrantic 64.12.116.67	5-Jan-05/10:10 PM
Apathy: Lack of interest or concern, especially regarding matters of general importance or appeal; indifference. Still a good poem, regardless. I still can't believe I took time to inspect your faulty contradiction by way of thesaurus. *8* P.S. Indifference: apathy demonstrated by an absence of emotional reactions P.P.S. I am a f**king loser.
Re: Math Poem 3 by Dovina	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	6-Jan-05/2:41 AM
I hate maths but that is a cool poem all the same!! Presently we are doing integration and diferential equations in school and I go to sleep everytime the teacher enters!! A 9!
regarding some deleted poem...	dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.12	6-Jan-05/1:15 PM
Very nice poem. Doug
Re: For being shaken out of Bad Thoughts. by fevriere	Dovina 69.175.6.101	6-Jan-05/7:52 AM
A fine comparison if you can know about afterlife (stars). The clockwork nature of sunsets (death) seems and the certainty of night seems stretched. Still a good poem.
Re: Blue Executioner by Caducus	Beyond_Dreams 67.51.232.76	6-Jan-05/9:39 AM
nicely written
Re: Math Poem 3 by Dovina	Shuushin 64.222.175.19	6-Jan-05/9:43 AM
You generated alot of interest in this one, D - nice work.
Re: The Toilet Paper Tumbles by PsydewaysTears	Shuushin 64.222.175.19	6-Jan-05/9:47 AM
reminds me of meatball I once knew.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 70.20.34.25	6-Jan-05/12:32 PM
unless someone does this first http://tinyurl.com/4htkb - then it's the last thing you see...
regarding some deleted poem...	Stacy Stewart 67.51.232.76	6-Jan-05/12:45 PM
I really like the concept of this poem