regarding some deleted poem...	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.145.144	18-Dec-04/12:21 AM
Wow. I love couplets
regarding some deleted poem...	PsydewaysTears 69.240.74.35	18-Dec-04/2:58 AM
Beautiful. This is what metaphors dream to become when they grow up. •°•Gregory James•°•
Re: Love-A=? by sir_heff	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.20.71	18-Dec-04/5:44 AM
Oh dear, another hopelessly bungling "math poeme". We can only pray the meltdown doesn't send the poemeranker server into a Hysteria.
Re: I Adore by Stacy Stewart	faithmairee 209.240.205.62	18-Dec-04/9:49 AM
intriguing piece...well done faithmairee
Re: Camping by jessicazee	Dovina 69.175.6.101	18-Dec-04/10:44 AM
You have posted this several times, each as a new poem. It might be better to post it as a revision of the same poem each time. Then the former comments are still there, but we can tell from the dates that they refer to an older version. It's still a good poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	18-Dec-04/11:52 AM
I got lost somewhere between the sadist and the masochist, which you assign to the same person.
Re: Ashes, Ashes by Firestarter	faithmairee 209.240.205.61	18-Dec-04/7:37 PM
excellent work...a true masterpiece faith
Re: Pollution by Firestarter	faithmairee 209.240.205.61	18-Dec-04/7:39 PM
absolutely awesome...i loved this poem
regarding some deleted poem...	PsydewaysTears 69.240.74.35	18-Dec-04/1:00 PM
Over the top wonderment, deeply moving and full of evocative images. An easy favorite... memorable to the last drop. •°•Gregory James•°•
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	18-Dec-04/2:41 PM
Superlatives that you don't really mean weaken your credibility - "much crueler Than anyone’s Hell" "Infinitely high"
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	18-Dec-04/2:43 PM
Not a limerick. If a woman can know what your eyes clearly show, then how can she mistake it?
Re: The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.148.25	18-Dec-04/2:49 PM
Looks like somebody found them self a muse.
regarding some deleted poem...	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.148.25	18-Dec-04/2:55 PM
"I 'will' never leave your side" Other than that Amazing.
regarding some deleted poem...	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.148.25	18-Dec-04/2:58 PM
Doesn't that always suck. -10-
Re: Pinhole by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 67.122.12.244	18-Dec-04/6:54 PM
I see where you're going with this poem. I think you could do better if you would rewrite the last two stanzas. You should let go of the uncertainty in the 4th stanza and wrap it up positively in the 5th. So, 'til then a -9- not a -10-.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 67.122.12.244	18-Dec-04/7:04 PM
It's blues. It rhymes. It has meter. It lacks the tension and release of a good lyric. I'm sure if you think about it a bit more, you could make the story move from the fire to the damage it has caused someone.
Re: Nothing Changes by Richard	faithmairee 209.240.205.61	18-Dec-04/7:28 PM
great poem...one of the best i have seen on here so far... faith
Re: The Bonfire of the Vanities by Firestarter	faithmairee 209.240.205.61	18-Dec-04/7:32 PM
gawd, you're good...this has a great flow to it, is extremely well-written with a very powerful delivery...great poem! faith
Re: Math Poem by Dovina	PsydewaysTears 69.240.74.35	18-Dec-04/10:00 PM
The ending captured my interest, but I was lucky to make it that far. I think that with an added beginning this might have accomplished just the right amount of balance and captivation. •°•Gregory James•°•
Re: A Better God by Dovina	PsydewaysTears 69.240.74.35	19-Dec-04/12:05 AM
I like this. A strong religious statement that's good both on a personal and universal level. Not too over-told or sidetracked, the focus is exactly where it should be. Lines thirteen and fourteen spoke most loudly to me, but it's altogether a worthwhile read. •°•Gregory James•°•