| Re: The wreck of a Memphis-Atlanta Greyhound by zodiac |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Dec-04/2:37 PM |
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| Re: The Pseudo-Portraitist by versus_u |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
17-Dec-04/5:06 AM |
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choose to die, then, friend.. choose to die.. 9
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50 |
17-Dec-04/2:52 PM |
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Before deleting everything to kingdom come, you asked for an explanation:
Your poeme contains the phrases "mound", "inner evils", "porcelain", "lust", and "lets out a sigh". Perhaps that's why I was so easily led astray, soiling you to the hilt with that extract from my bumoirs. You asked for help, but if my stained portfolio is anything to go by, you have little to gain from any more of my opinions. Unless, of course, you feel like spending an evening CHEZ TURD?
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Dec-04/10:00 AM |
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Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
17-Dec-04/10:02 AM |
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"I will be good by not being me." good line.
"and my Mother I suckled who gave me life" - clumsy.
"embers' glow"
"awake known."
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Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
17-Dec-04/10:06 AM |
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I can relate to a mixture of feelings as I read this, even without knowing what it's about. Maybe that's the most one can hope for.
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| Re: The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Dec-04/10:10 AM |
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Best thing I've ever read... Today anyway.
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Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
17-Dec-04/10:20 AM |
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Doomed from the start, a lonely man's common tale. Get the spelling right and spiff up the prose, and you too can join the ranks of poets chanting as they march with the lemmings.
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Dec-04/10:25 AM |
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Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
17-Dec-04/11:27 AM |
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I once walked along the Appalachian Trail and camped under the hardwoods and felt the music you beautifully describe. The ransom of kisses was not there, nor shining stones of silent blood, or I missed them. But other visions linger from that forested walk, and yours might help to draw them up.
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some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
17-Dec-04/11:54 AM |
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50 |
17-Dec-04/12:45 PM |
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Don't listen to Dovina. She knows nothing about poetry, and is most likely jealous of you because your poemes rhyme -10-
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Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
17-Dec-04/1:05 PM |
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You can listen to everyone who votes 10 because that tells you you have touched the hearts of truly appreciative listeners.
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| Re: Love-A=? by sir_heff |
zodiac 212.118.11.11 |
17-Dec-04/10:54 PM |
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re: "There is no logic to explain the way A feels".
There is. If A is profoundly dim. -10-
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| Re: Sissy Faggot by Shardik |
jessicazee 64.12.116.135 |
17-Dec-04/11:54 PM |
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| Re: Timberjack by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
17-Dec-04/3:41 PM |
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Come on, at least tell me I used a bunch of redundancies.
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| Re: Pinhole by Dovina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50 |
17-Dec-04/5:50 PM |
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"Listen, dear, you couldn't write FUCK on a dusty Venetian blind." - Coral Browne
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| Re: Love-A=? by sir_heff |
Shardik 24.130.62.63 |
17-Dec-04/6:22 PM |
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| Re: Pinhole by Dovina |
Shardik 24.130.62.63 |
17-Dec-04/7:04 PM |
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"Pardon me Methusula, but you couldn't write "Gawd" On the ass of Babylon with a floured wet spot."
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| Re: Pinhole by Dovina |
Shardik 24.130.62.63 |
17-Dec-04/7:09 PM |
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That quote was from Captain Napkin, of the Clan McKnapkin year 16zerothe6.
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