regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 147.226.160.198	3-Nov-04/9:35 AM
Beautiful flow. Nicely done.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 147.226.160.198	3-Nov-04/9:41 AM
I love the rhythm and repitition.
Re: My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	3-Nov-04/10:15 AM
Shut up.
Re: Grandma by Dovina	wilco 4.226.153.210	3-Nov-04/6:43 PM
I hear that arthritis is painful.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 4.226.153.210	3-Nov-04/6:46 PM
Not bad sentiment but if you expect me to take the ime to read it, you could at least take the time to proofread and put the correct puncuation in the poem. Is inasmuch a word?
Re: An Arrow and a Knife by blues	wilco 4.226.153.210	3-Nov-04/6:49 PM
sorry
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 4.226.153.210	3-Nov-04/7:01 PM
I've been away from the ranker for a while and now that I've come back, I'm glad to read to pretty good poems. This being one (of not that many actually).
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 168.28.202.8	3-Nov-04/8:21 AM
This is one beautiful poem. I like the over all rhyme flow. It swirls through. And the message is clear. I like it. Nicely written.
Re: Butterflies by Caducus	zodiac 212.118.14.17	3-Nov-04/12:56 AM
In all seriousness, I would spend less time worrying if I'd included enough polysyllables and more time fixing hack, overwrought and ungrammatical sentence structures. Like the repeated subjectless past tenses in the first stanza (including bonus mispunctuated last two lines!) Like "from... to" in the second stanza. Like the incomplete present-participled sentence in the third (and, bonus! more incorrect and missing punctuation!!!) Like "saying goodbye... to meet again", which sounds trite AND is hard grammar. Like comma-bound non sequitors throughout. PS-Do you think there are seasons in the afterlife?
Re: My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy	zodiac 212.118.14.17	3-Nov-04/12:58 AM
I'm with richa. By the time you're vomiting, you're not ashamed of much of anything.
regarding some deleted poem...	jroday 204.215.33.211	3-Nov-04/3:06 AM
If there is no struggle, there is no progress. WE are all the same.it is only our knowledge and wisdom that separate us.
Re: My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy	edpeterson 68.79.60.123	3-Nov-04/9:05 AM
so, you are saying, "now you copulate in the flame" ?
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 168.28.203.12	3-Nov-04/11:41 AM
Hey I like this piece. Is beautiful and flows in good tone.
regarding some deleted poem...	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	3-Nov-04/1:05 PM
Oh Jesus that's a pint of poop.
regarding some deleted poem...	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	3-Nov-04/1:05 PM
Ha ha ha!!! PRICELESS.
regarding some deleted poem...	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	3-Nov-04/1:05 PM
Unreadable.
regarding some deleted poem...	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	3-Nov-04/1:06 PM
No, it's not.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 17.255.240.138	3-Nov-04/1:37 PM
Punctuation is not consistent. Capitals at line starts are not consistent. Last line is confusing.
Re: Grandma by Dovina	jroday 204.215.34.212	3-Nov-04/2:32 PM
Reminds me of my grandmother when she was living.It gets no better than this, keep up the good work.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 4.226.153.210	3-Nov-04/6:53 PM
Not your best, but not your worst either. I have grown to dislike this style of writing wih his writing scheme....oh well