regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.16.170	2-Nov-04/8:27 PM
And so He dies His ignominious death, or am I mistaken?
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.16.170	2-Nov-04/8:30 PM
Absolutely FANTASTIC, The first stanza grabbed me. You know the myth of the sparrow's song? If not, all the better. Sweet. Is there only ten on this scale???
Re: Two Years by berdabear	sliver 63.189.16.170	2-Nov-04/8:33 PM
I can feel the echoes of your love in the words you have written. Thank you for sharing them.
Re: Ash by horus8	sliver 63.189.16.170	2-Nov-04/8:37 PM
Very well done Hoarus, I truly enjoyed this piece. It reminds me of my dad's favorite poem... I pass by a poor old farmhouse, It's shingles broken and black. Good Imagery
regarding some deleted poem...	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	2-Nov-04/8:48 PM
Real nice.
Re: An Arrow and a Knife by blues	sliver 63.189.16.170	2-Nov-04/8:52 PM
Guess it didn't work out huh? Move on man, there's more to life. Much.
Re: Draw Me A Pretty Picture by cuddlytiger17	sliver 63.189.16.170	2-Nov-04/8:56 PM
DAMN Cuddly one. Tis the best yet, in my humble opinion. A light bright enough? BRILLIANT! Yes!
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.16.170	2-Nov-04/9:00 PM
A well written argument, from the point of the unborn. Perhaps Ed and the rest of the world will realize the life lost someday. Of course you will grow and change, but you already have a better moral code than most. Stay Strong.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.16.170	2-Nov-04/9:02 PM
KE? You need to borrow a dime? ok, but you know pay phones are fifty cents now don't you?
regarding some deleted poem...	oneglove 205.133.194.234	2-Nov-04/10:34 PM
i just wish there was more
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.14.17	3-Nov-04/12:18 AM
Your Spanish is bad as ever. Contigo is one word. Sueno should be sueño. You mispunctuated after the second necesito, corazón, and bonitas. And the only thing that keeps this poem from sounding like the worst kind of cliche hack is that Spanish songs pretty much do sound like this. As always, Spanish sounds more romantic and less cliche than English to you because you don't speak it very well. Do you think the following lines sound like anything but hack in English? Tell me please Because I want to know. I need to know and how I need you With all my heart And all my body. I'm going to dream with you tonight In your arms of love. We're going to do many beautiful things In my head. Tell me... tell me Tell me, please, do you love me? I love you... my love... - Jesus, you probably do.
Re: Goethe: Wanderer's Evening Song by Sasha	vulcan 80.242.8.17	2-Nov-04/11:58 AM
pleasant!
Re: Poems for devolution by richa	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	2-Nov-04/5:00 PM
Lol
Re: Poems for devolution by richa	Dovina 24.52.156.155	2-Nov-04/7:53 PM
I'll say something now that you've revised it to where an ordinary American thinks she understands. The arguement that turning clocks back in the fall for farmers in northern latitudes is hogwash. They don't work the fields during winter, so how does a time change help them? Arizona has the right plan - no plan at all. I think you could have said it tighter and with more impact by leaving out haggis and gristle.
Re: Ash by horus8	zodiac 212.118.14.17	3-Nov-04/12:49 AM
Dickenson.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.156.155	2-Nov-04/8:05 PM
No on 1 and 2. No on most of the ballot propositions today. The pumpkin idea holds up pretty well.
Re: On Youth Revisited by vulcan	Dovina 24.52.156.155	2-Nov-04/8:09 PM
"Rainbow after a grim shower" just doesn't work, but neither does the last verse, and "methinks" doesn't fit either. Sorry.
Re: Inspire Me by Blindpoetry	Dovina 24.52.156.155	2-Nov-04/8:10 PM
blind poetry. Open your eyes.
Re: Bird (Yang) by <{Baba^Yaga}>	Dovina 24.52.156.155	2-Nov-04/8:14 PM
A female-sounding thing, come from a ranker witch, amazing.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.16.170	2-Nov-04/8:24 PM
Very well written, and a good reminder to us all. A good thing to consider. Thank you for the refresher course. Nice to see more Catholics on Poem Ranker, for a while there I was all alone.