Re: Call upon the wrath of god on ye by Imago	edpeterson 68.79.20.59	29-Oct-04/8:15 PM
rigiditus nippulatum, et clampostona ingratiae solorum solarum, slapadiddle dildatum
Re: The Star Of The Bum by Blindpoetry	edpeterson 68.79.20.59	29-Oct-04/8:18 PM
is this written in braille or some other code?
Re: The correct order of things by Stephen Robins	edpeterson 68.79.20.59	29-Oct-04/8:22 PM
a nude, three-legged sack race in a mosquito swarm.
regarding some deleted poem...	edpeterson 68.79.20.59	29-Oct-04/8:50 PM
it has been wrote? is this really what you meant to said?
regarding some deleted poem...	thisismyusername 64.136.27.225	29-Oct-04/7:15 PM
see alma.....ur good at expressing emotion!
regarding some deleted poem...	thisismyusername 64.136.27.225	29-Oct-04/7:21 PM
again...awesome portrayal of emotion
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 152.163.100.68	29-Oct-04/7:21 PM
great poem!...sorry i am not the best on comments :)
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 152.163.100.68	29-Oct-04/7:22 PM
long poem! Good poem! 10/10
regarding some deleted poem...	thisismyusername 64.136.27.225	29-Oct-04/7:25 PM
HA i was the first to comment...nice guilt trip...and very awesome perspective!!!!...
regarding some deleted poem...	thisismyusername 64.136.27.225	29-Oct-04/7:33 PM
u did it again bratsy!
Re: From Womb To Wood by Caducus	edpeterson 68.79.20.59	29-Oct-04/7:49 PM
I don't think the end redeems anything. He should never have died? hmmmm I thought it was well conceived and well written until the last few lines... though the entire last stanza is awkward.
regarding some deleted poem...	edpeterson 68.79.20.59	29-Oct-04/7:57 PM
you have a smaller mind. you must have a mind full of distorts. i hope you are young and have not exhausted your capacity for learning and change. This "poem" is horribly garbled. Is English your native language?
Re: The Old Man by spriggan	edpeterson 68.79.20.59	29-Oct-04/8:01 PM
fucking hilarious. Why is he taking pain killers that poison his body? There are perfectly good painkillers on the market that do not poison the body. nothing worse than a poor afficted soul, eh? the end line makes it all worth while, and completely stands this motherfucker on its head and redeems it with a broom handle.
Re: The Old Man by spriggan	edpeterson 68.79.20.59	29-Oct-04/8:02 PM
a gaping hole. This is great.
Re: My Friend Burgers by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	30-Oct-04/8:04 AM
I was just about to send Burgers a link to this poeme, but on reading it a second time I realised that that would be an unbelievably appalling idea. Particularly so soon after his you know what.
Re: The Old Man by spriggan	Imago 64.8.77.177	29-Oct-04/11:06 PM
Just the last part is concrete. But still a good story. Chris Reeves would be proud.
regarding some deleted poem...	Imago 64.8.77.177	29-Oct-04/11:19 PM
Hello President Bush how are you. No really I agree with your stance. I once wrote about this too. A child unwanted is all the more wanted, This I know to be true, For they are like angels meant only for heaven, Those who we wish we knew, Some are to be born into a world of regret, Others to be born into death, Some seeking love never getting enough of, Others never getting a breath. Your poems good but could use some shortening.
regarding some deleted poem...	Imago 64.8.77.177	29-Oct-04/11:29 PM
You don't need the second sentence. The bird puns were a little corny but fit with the story. Is it me or do my comments have a tendancy to rhyme. Oh well makes up for all that damn free verse out there. Anyhow I loved the story. And I suppose it's poetry so bravo.
Re: whilst the bells ring by richa	Imago 64.8.77.193	30-Oct-04/1:19 AM
Whilst ropes huh? Sounds a little archaic for common language
Re: whilst the bells ring by richa	Imago 64.8.77.193	30-Oct-04/1:31 AM
It's all fine except the "ding a dong" part. Last time my dong was dinged it hurt like hell.