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patty t 24.156.158.81 |
12-Sep-04/6:14 PM |
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| Re: Ichobod Racecar by T. Jonathron Remp |
patty t 24.156.158.81 |
12-Sep-04/6:15 PM |
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don't they call themselves the 'roma'? -9-
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| Re: Daddy by LintyWeenis |
darylchew 202.156.2.130 |
13-Sep-04/6:24 AM |
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| Re: Run Material Girl by singinkygal |
Dan garcia-Black 66.159.232.143 |
13-Sep-04/8:41 AM |
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| Re: Born Of Hope by longships |
daggatolar 212.247.106.51 |
13-Sep-04/11:01 AM |
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Much like my dark black country, Nigeria, except that unlike you, I do not see the "children born of hope" here, we are all a long way from "A new beginning"
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| Re: the Heart is not unmade by broke by daggatolar |
Prince of Void 217.218.131.145 |
13-Sep-04/11:06 AM |
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Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
12-Sep-04/3:07 PM |
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He won't change. They never do, dear. Take him as he is or not at all. I like the frustration I see in this poem.
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| Re: a goblet of divine wine brings me dreams by Prince of Void |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
12-Sep-04/3:11 PM |
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Yea, I've felt like that, the haunting love of divinity, into the mystical world. Why is that? Good poem.
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| Re: Grandpa's boat by Caducus |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
12-Sep-04/3:14 PM |
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| Re: Your Embrace by Brandy_n_Cali |
patty t 24.156.158.81 |
12-Sep-04/6:10 PM |
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more than just a friendly game of twister -9-
but why the change from 'you' to 'him'?
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patty t 24.156.158.81 |
12-Sep-04/6:13 PM |
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smile-inducing. I would cut out the "I'm sure" in the last line though. -9-
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| Re: ... by Jezabele-In-Hell |
Jezabele-In-Hell 68.18.34.16 |
12-Sep-04/9:02 PM |
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Interesting. I am not familiar with the fallacies of Cartesian Materialism...but would love to learn about them. Can you explain them?
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| Re: save by calliope |
daggatolar 212.247.106.51 |
13-Sep-04/11:09 AM |
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Unfortunately, the "uncooked" beef is in wait for the fire. The butcher deed is done already.... if only our love can become love beyond the self then maybe freedom can grow to mean something in us for others.
Good poem can only fit in a world transformed free from strive and competition
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| Re: take it easy by skaskowski |
Prince of Void 217.218.131.145 |
13-Sep-04/11:10 AM |
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| Re: staring contest by FreeFormFixation |
Prince of Void 217.218.131.145 |
13-Sep-04/11:13 AM |
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| Re: save by calliope |
Prince of Void 217.218.131.145 |
13-Sep-04/11:15 AM |
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daggatolar 212.247.106.51 |
13-Sep-04/11:25 AM |
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love can only truly be love only when its reason is nothing but love, even God or Jesus for a reason to hinged love on, trepasses on the singular preserve of love.
I like the agitation with which the poem was written , keep close to your feelings and for sure the world would yet see more and even better poems from you.
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| Re: Heaven vs. Hell by angel born in hell |
Tintagiles 142.166.234.173 |
13-Sep-04/2:25 PM |
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Suddenly I remember why rhyming fell into disrepute. But hey, unless you've died before, how d'you know that death's not worse?
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| Re: For you by Montinequego |
Tintagiles 142.166.234.173 |
13-Sep-04/2:38 PM |
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Mediocrity code: 0070C021
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| Re: Sleep of Death by necroscope7 |
Tintagiles 142.166.234.173 |
13-Sep-04/2:39 PM |
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Mediocrity code: 0070F000
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