regarding some deleted poem...	frdup717 4.29.181.60	20-Aug-04/2:56 PM
YAY!
Re: Cold Nights In Ohio by Fear of Garbage	horus8 24.130.62.63	21-Aug-04/3:07 PM
What? Move.
regarding some deleted poem...	frdup717 4.29.181.60	20-Aug-04/2:55 PM
not bad -7-
Re: Tonight At The Dead Man's Ball by dougsoderstrom	dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.1	21-Aug-04/3:01 PM
Thanks for the help. I changed "one's" to "ones." Doug
Re: Tonight At The Dead Man's Ball by dougsoderstrom	Prince of Void 217.218.131.145	21-Aug-04/5:53 PM
All the world’s an illusion
Re: if i had a nickel by fair12	horus8 24.130.62.63	21-Aug-04/3:04 PM
You're funny... So what you're saying is that with enough happy thought focusing we can all fly off to Uranus, brilliant.
Re: Tonight At The Dead Man's Ball by dougsoderstrom	horus8 24.130.62.63	21-Aug-04/3:11 PM
You are aware that one can order in viagra, correct?
Re: The 80's by wilco	klosterfobik 64.12.116.140	21-Aug-04/11:10 PM
I like the thought behind the lyrics - very nostalgic,yet depressing in a certain way.
Re: The Ballade of Hollis Browne by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	tolstoyleo 4.40.105.212	22-Aug-04/12:58 AM
Very Langston Hughes-ish with the repeating of the first line. Extremely lewd. Even for you... Cheers
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.19	22-Aug-04/10:32 AM
The allusions are all very effective and affective.-10-
Re: A Stitch In Time by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 64.161.176.190	21-Aug-04/7:54 PM
Great last four lines (along with all the rest). A morning love Into an afternoon love, ("Into one from this afternoon"? Too much love in this poem for my taste.)-10- Anyway it's good without my meddling.
Re: R.I.P (Epitaphs) by MacFrantic	Dovina 24.52.157.176	20-Aug-04/10:35 AM
The first verse is great, says it all.
Re: Dads are suppose to stay by Brandy_n_Cali	horus8 24.130.62.63	21-Aug-04/1:38 PM
a tic turd on high whip.
Re: Tonight At The Dead Man's Ball by dougsoderstrom	Dovina 24.52.157.176	20-Aug-04/1:34 PM
Not bad, like a lyric, could be sung at the opening of the Republican convention.
Re: Life by camperdfl	Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.248.113	20-Aug-04/3:45 PM
nice!! I like it! But hey keep your head up!
Re: Q For Some Reason by MacFrantic	some deleted user 80.205.204.223	20-Aug-04/2:42 PM
I bet no one has read this without scratching thier head. Next time, write one about swallowing shot-puts for no reason. 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	21-Aug-04/1:39 PM
A giant globule of pointless fodder. -=9=-
Re: Dads are suppose to stay by Brandy_n_Cali	Dovina 24.52.157.176	21-Aug-04/7:23 AM
The thought is good, but the poem could use more of the devices that attract someone unfamiliar with you and your subject. I often say that the spirit of a poem is more important than it's form, but here form is lacking. You've got the hard part, the rest is easy.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	20-Aug-04/12:26 PM
The magic in love, may it last and last!
Re: R.I.P (Epitaphs) by MacFrantic	dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.1	20-Aug-04/12:46 PM
Sordid....... but rather nicely said!