| Re: A Stitch In Time by Dovina |
Prince of Void 217.218.131.137 |
22-Aug-04/1:47 PM |
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...........Always Beautiful ..........
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| Re: Owain Glyndwr by Nicholas Jones |
Prince of Void 217.218.131.140 |
23-Aug-04/1:25 AM |
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that's really a nice poem...
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| Re: The huntsman's secret by Stephen Robins |
Prince of Void 217.218.131.140 |
23-Aug-04/1:20 AM |
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very good...that's really a nice poem ..
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| Re: Easier To Say Good-bye by Brandy_n_Cali |
Prince of Void 217.218.131.140 |
23-Aug-04/1:27 AM |
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that's really a nice poem ........
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| Re: Symphony of Despairs by Prince of Void |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63 |
22-Aug-04/3:18 PM |
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I see the dictionary was opened to D for dung-or-eeeeees.
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Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
22-Aug-04/3:23 PM |
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What fun in the dandilions, I remember it well.
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| Re: A Stitch In Time by Dovina |
klosterfobik 205.188.116.140 |
22-Aug-04/8:52 PM |
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You captured a moment of us all.
Very well wrighten.-9-
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| Re: Easier To Say Good-bye by Brandy_n_Cali |
Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.19 |
22-Aug-04/10:37 AM |
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| Re: Waiting by Spindle |
Prince of Void 217.218.131.140 |
23-Aug-04/1:36 AM |
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i love this line" by an ever-present waiting"
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| Re: Symphony of Despairs by Prince of Void |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
22-Aug-04/3:01 PM |
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Yes, such despair, deprivation, disilusionment and misconception. All is void of hope and any glimmer of happiness. Hey, might as well eat, drink and be merry.
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electroman1979 198.81.16.26 |
22-Aug-04/9:04 PM |
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good poem, seems you beat me too it, i like it
-10-
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| Re: I Got A Girl by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
Nicholas Jones 137.44.1.225 |
23-Aug-04/3:16 AM |
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'I Got a Girl' was a song by Tripping Daisy, the lead was Tim DeLaughter who went on to form the Polyphonic Spree.
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| Re: Penumbra by klosterfobik |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
23-Aug-04/1:32 AM |
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Why, oh why does poemranker occasionally throw up misanthropes with such stultifying perspicacity as to render the whole website as redundant as a mid-month jam rag?
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| Re: Faith by Dovina |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
23-Aug-04/4:06 AM |
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Fuck the Irish and skidding clouds. Everytime I read your words I want to dry-hump your leg until I wear my ridge off.
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<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63 |
22-Aug-04/1:06 PM |
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ha ha ha haaaaa... whore.
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<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63 |
22-Aug-04/1:13 PM |
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what did the tampon say to the leper?
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| Re: Dads are suppose to stay by Brandy_n_Cali |
Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.19 |
22-Aug-04/10:45 AM |
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This is what I expect my kids will feel when I die. It's bearable, compared to having to live with their mother.
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| Re: Symphony of Despairs by Prince of Void |
daggatolar 212.247.106.51 |
22-Aug-04/12:26 PM |
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Enriched by too many big words, demanding more than a second reading to mean our world so full of despairs of
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| Re: Inquietude by klosterfobik |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
22-Aug-04/11:23 AM |
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I would only shorten some of the phrases, otherwise great. For example:
narrowed to less than alone,
pulled beneath the ruin of was,
dropped upon the broken promise of forever -
a restless drunken dream
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| Re: A Stitch In Time by Dovina |
XxRuby_KillsXx 67.180.80.13 |
22-Aug-04/11:57 AM |
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Hey...I didnt rate you..I dont leave comments or rate anyone..but I guess if it should that I rated you a one it must of been my friend. She is the one that reads the comments and replay to them if she wishes. All I do is post my poems. I read a few of them and I though they where good. So heres te ~10~ you deserve not a one. Tell me what peom you got rated a one so I could change that. bye bye always Ruby.
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